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And Then

Dave Undis

December 17, 2015

Genre: Country

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Martin Vipond

Great audio hook. Love the way it returns in the chorus. Well written. I can hear a couple of different pop-country artists cutting this. Nice work.

December 22, 2015

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Phillip Lemmonds

I really like it and can hear it being played on the radio today.  Sounds like a Keith Urban song to me.

December 30, 2015

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Robert Lloyd

I liked it too. But from my perspective, it would be better sung by a girl if it took just a little re-write. But it’s a great recording as is and I would still approach a female artist with this recording as it is.

But I hesitate to think a real man blushes in the cheek or his knees get weak. We just aren’t wired that way. At least not anyone guy I know. But it would be perfect from a girls perspective and the song has punch! Great job Dave. By the way, your demos are killers.

May 30, 2017

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And Then
by Dave Undis and Michael Skotte

VERSE
I saw you. I smiled.
You noticed. You smiled.
I saw that. I laughed.
You saw that. You laughed.
I asked you to dance.
You smiled and said yes.
When you had to go
I walked you home.

CHORUS
And then you kissed me, and the blood ran to my cheeks.
And then you kissed me, and it made my knees go weak.
You kissed me and then I said let’s do that again.
And then you kissed me. And then…

VERSE
A phone call for hours.
A bouquet of flowers.
A Sunday alone.
A picnic. A show.
A weekend away.
A quiet café.
I said “I love you.
Do you love me too?”

CHORUS
And then you kissed me, and the blood ran to my cheeks.
And then you kissed me, and it made my knees go weak.
You kissed me and then I said let’s do that again.
And then you kissed me. And then…

BRIDGE
A ring. A gasp.
I knelt. I asked.
A pause. A breath.
A nod. A laugh.

CHORUS
And then you kissed me, and the blood ran to my cheeks.
And then you kissed me, and it made my knees go weak.
And then you kissed me…
And then you kissed me…
You kissed me and then I said let’s do that again.
And then you kissed me. And then…
I said let’s do that again.…
And then…

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Martin Vipond

Great audio hook. Love the way it returns in the chorus. Well written. I can hear a couple of different pop-country artists cutting this. Nice work.

December 22, 2015

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Phillip Lemmonds

I really like it and can hear it being played on the radio today.  Sounds like a Keith Urban song to me.

December 30, 2015

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Robert Lloyd

I liked it too. But from my perspective, it would be better sung by a girl if it took just a little re-write. But it’s a great recording as is and I would still approach a female artist with this recording as it is.

But I hesitate to think a real man blushes in the cheek or his knees get weak. We just aren’t wired that way. At least not anyone guy I know. But it would be perfect from a girls perspective and the song has punch! Great job Dave. By the way, your demos are killers.

May 30, 2017


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