That feeling when you first feel the magic has gone from your relationship.
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Something's not right
Your eyes aren't bright no more
You used to smile like I was your valentine
Every time I walked in this door
But something changed
Now baby when you look at me
You give me a don't give a damn now face
From a place that you'd rather be
And it's not easy
When someone's leaving
But they're not yet gone
I know what's coming
So please get going
This just feels too wrong
Cause it's not like you
To not like me
Looking back now
I guess I've been a better man
The kind of guy that would never break a vow
The kind of guy to give a damn
But then I changed
Someone got the best of me
And though you forgave me my worst mistake
I know I should have set you free
But it's not easy
When someone's leaving
But they're not yet gone
I know what's coming
So please get going
This just feels too wrong
Cause it's not like you
To not like me
What I did to you
Broke all our dreams
I hope I can prove
Time's all you need
Cause it's not like you
To not like me
Looking back now
I guess I've been a better man
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“Your eyes aren’t bright no more”
This isn’t normal English. You’re reaching for a rhyme.
Go to http://www.b-rhymes.com and find something better.
October 25, 2015
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Paul Tarvydas
“Your eyes aren’t bright no more”
This isn’t normal English. You’re reaching for a rhyme.
Go to http://www.b-rhymes.com and find something better.
October 25, 2015
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