First song I wrote getting back into songwriting this year. Theme is a bit old for the market, but I like the story.
All thoughts gratefully accepted.
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Didn't plan to see you
Down the corner store
Time's treated you real good
Me? I'm not so sure.
Your kids have your smile
You make a beautiful mom
They could have been mine
But I was young and dumb
Now the road is long
It makes me wonder - did I get things right?
Or make the worst mistake of my whole life?
Livin' wild, wasting all my time
Now not as young and dumb, I'd make you mine.
Back when you loved me
I didn't understand
While I was being a bad boy
You needed a man
I could have been stronger
But that ain't fun
I turned to the bottle
'Cause I was young and dumb
Now the road is long
It makes me wonder - did I get things right?
Or make the worst mistake of my whole life?
Livin' wild and wasting all my time
Now not as young and dumb, I'd make you mine.
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Now the road is long
It makes me wonder - did I get things right?
Or make the worst mistake of my whole life?
Livin' wild and wasting all my time
Now the road is long
I know that I didn't I get things right.
I made the worst mistake of my whole life.
I was livin' wild and wasting all my time
Now not as young and dumb, I'd make you mine.
I'd make you mine.
I could've been stronger.
I should have made you mine.
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