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Stories

Jeremy Shere

October 13, 2015

Genre: Pop

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This song is about how we understand ourselves and each other.

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Mikalyn Hay

really like the lryic “in the moments before sleep .......”

Lots of good lyrics and almost could be two songs here. 

nice work Jeremy

October 15, 2015

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Jeremy Shere

Thanks much.

October 15, 2015

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Stories

Who am I
What am I
Am I anything more than
Flesh and blood and bone
I don’t know

I like to think that I’m so special
One of a kind a singular mind of my own
But I don’t know

We’re all just stories
That we tell ourselves about ourselves
Imaging we’re heroes in action movie scene
But we’re chemical captives
To our brain’s disdain for anything
That doesn’t appear to be what it seems

I never feel more alive
Than when I’m outside of my mind
Wholly unbound

In the moments before sleep
Dissolving all the ties that bind
Hold me down

We’re all just stories
That we tell ourselves about ourselves
Imaging we’re heroes in action movie scene
But we’re chemical captives
To our brain’s disdain for anything
That doesn’t appear to be what it seems

We’re all searching for serenity and love and peace and happiness and all the rest
But if we dive too deep inside our minds it’s just an empty quest

What part of me is really me
What part of you is really you
How much of me can you see right through?

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Mikalyn Hay

really like the lryic “in the moments before sleep .......”

Lots of good lyrics and almost could be two songs here. 

nice work Jeremy

October 15, 2015

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Jeremy Shere

Thanks much.

October 15, 2015


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