She wasn't you!
Radio ready or round file?
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Hi, Benny! There’s some nice writing here- I can “see” your song. You ask if it’s radio ready, but I’m afraid it’s pretty traditional for today’s country radio. (That’s not a comment on the song’s quality- just on it’s current commercial appeal.) If radio play is your goal, take more melodic and lyrical chances. You have to write AHEAD of the radio- bring something new to the table. But just as a song, it makes sense, it’s a good title, and there’s a lot of imagery. So there’s a lot of solid craft there. Keep writing!
September 03, 2015
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Hi, Benny! There’s some nice writing here- I can “see” your song. You ask if it’s radio ready, but I’m afraid it’s pretty traditional for today’s country radio. (That’s not a comment on the song’s quality- just on it’s current commercial appeal.) If radio play is your goal, take more melodic and lyrical chances. You have to write AHEAD of the radio- bring something new to the table. But just as a song, it makes sense, it’s a good title, and there’s a lot of imagery. So there’s a lot of solid craft there. Keep writing!
September 03, 2015
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