I wanted to write a song to describe how my life has changed and how i feel in my relationship with my girlfriend.
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With You - Lyrics Music and Lyrics By: Jerry Stenger ©
VERSE 1
There was a time, when in my mind,
I thought I knew everything, my life was complete.
Then you came along, and you changed all the things I thought that I knew, we’re making something new
Chorus
Because every time I look into your eyes, something comes along & takes me by surprise; and my heart has opened up in so many ways,
its like Christmas morning every, every single day with you
VERSE 2
Everyday’s new, now is the time to look into all our dreams, and make them all come true.
We’re both so strong, set in our own ways it’s not easy to change, but we’re willing to.
Chorus
Because every time I look into your eyes, something comes along and takes me by surprise; & my heart has opened up in so many ways, it’s like Christmas morning every, every single day, with you.
BRIDGE
We know that we belong to one another, and our hearts, they beat as one together. and so we build our lives,
dreams no longer inside
Chorus
Because every time I look into your eyes, something comes along and takes me by surprise; & my heart has opened up in so many ways, it’s like Christmas morning every, every single day, with you.
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Mary Segato
Nicely done Jerry!
June 05, 2015
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