".....On rainy days, the monk Ryokan feels sorry for himself...."
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On The Porch
© 2015 Don Nelson
Just a note to say that I stopped by
I guess you weren’t home – I‘m not surprised
Maybe I should have called first…
Hope you’re doing well – I haven’t heard
Hope you get on well with all your friends at work
I saw the cat in the window…
Stopped by to pick up what I’d left behind
But that was the last thing on my mind
On my mind…on my mind…
Leaving you this note taped to your door
Leaving here again just like before
Wish I could say more…
But there’s nothing more to say we haven’t said
I guess it’s really just as well that you weren’t home
I won’t come back here anymore…
Didn’t mean to hurt you or be so unkind
That was the last thing on my mind
On my mind…on my mind…
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