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Thanks for posting your song on Frettie! Sorry to hear feedback has been low. I’ll be sure to give it a listen and let you know what I think. Have you tried the “Request Feedback” tool yet? I use that each time I post a new song and I see a nice uptick of feedback. It’s a nice way to reach out to others across the community and make them aware of your new song being posted. I also use it as a way to handpick who I want feedback from based on style etc. Let me know if this helps!
March 13, 2015
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Benny, Sorry for the delay here. Big fan of your style. I think I’ve said it before but it has such a classic country feel to it. Takes me back to the days of listening to classic country records with my dad. I like this song haha. You’re good at engaging the listener. The little echo is a nice touch. Spicy Man.. Spicy haha. Good chuckle. What else have you been working on?
March 19, 2015
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Your awesomeness is indescribable!! No wonder that God himself is a fan!! And, obviously the Angels love you!!! I do too brother!! Love the heavenly effect on the voice!
March 24, 2015
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ANGEL WITH BUFFALO WINGS
COPYRIGHT J. BENNY PITSINGER 2014
One stormy night I was woke up from a deep and peaceful sleep
My old radio hadn’t worked in years but it suddenly began to speak
The voice came thru clear as a bell, I wrote down every word
So don’t tell me that I’m crazy, I know just what I heard
A mighty voice said “Ben your songs are very special things
For each time someone plays your tunes and angel gets their wings”
Buffalo wings that is
Deep fried
Music calms the savage beast and heals the troubled soul
But my music does much more than this, I want you all to know
When my songs are heard, right then occurs a most miraculous thing
Y’see every time my songs are played an angel gets their wings
With blue cheese
And celery
I’ll admit that I was baffled, even just a little scared
That radio’d been busted for nigh on fifteen years
But there it was a sayin’’ as plain as could be said
That when they play a song of mine an angel would be fed
So when you hear my music know that somewhere up above
An angel’s rolling up their sleeves and getting’ them some grub
Chicken wings,
Spicy, man, spicy
Music calms the savage beast and heals the troubled soul
But my music does much more than this, Yes I believe its so
When my songs are heard, right then occurs a most miraculous thing
Every time my songs are played an angel gets their wings
With onion rings
And a wet napkin
Please call your local DJ and request my songs a bunch
Cause every time they play ‘em an angel gets their lunch
And each time that you hear ‘em turn it up a little bit
Cause the louder that the music plays the hotter them wings get
And not only when they play my tunes does a plate of wings appear
Each time you buy my CD an angel gets a beer
A tall boy,
cold as ice
Not the cheap stuff either
None of that malt liquor
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ZERO responses. Guess that is the reason Frettie is dieing on the vine.
March 13, 2015
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Thanks for posting your song on Frettie! Sorry to hear feedback has been low. I’ll be sure to give it a listen and let you know what I think. Have you tried the “Request Feedback” tool yet? I use that each time I post a new song and I see a nice uptick of feedback. It’s a nice way to reach out to others across the community and make them aware of your new song being posted. I also use it as a way to handpick who I want feedback from based on style etc. Let me know if this helps!
March 13, 2015
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Benny, Sorry for the delay here. Big fan of your style. I think I’ve said it before but it has such a classic country feel to it. Takes me back to the days of listening to classic country records with my dad. I like this song haha. You’re good at engaging the listener. The little echo is a nice touch. Spicy Man.. Spicy haha. Good chuckle. What else have you been working on?
March 19, 2015
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Your awesomeness is indescribable!! No wonder that God himself is a fan!! And, obviously the Angels love you!!! I do too brother!! Love the heavenly effect on the voice!
March 24, 2015
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ZERO responses. Guess that is the reason Frettie is dieing on the vine.
March 13, 2015
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