"I Cant help but speak the things I've seen and heard" Acts 4:20
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1) Just curious—why didn’t you post the lyrics here—that often helps to draw the listener in (as they follow along on the lyrics while they listen to the song).
2) I think this is quite nice—production outstanding, vocals quite good, lead guitar sounds first-rate, song interesting, both musically and lyrically (though I do wish you had posted the lyrics, as I might have been able to give specific feedback about the lyrics.
3) All in all, I like it—Not sure where you ought to “plug it next,” but I think it is quite solid, and I think this song is worth pitching in a number of places, and on a number of levels. I think it’s as solid as any number of rock-n-roll songs I have heard on radio, and I don’t say that lightly.
4) Best wishes in all your songwriting endeavors!!
August 08, 2018
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Bob Abner
1) Just curious—why didn’t you post the lyrics here—that often helps to draw the listener in (as they follow along on the lyrics while they listen to the song).
2) I think this is quite nice—production outstanding, vocals quite good, lead guitar sounds first-rate, song interesting, both musically and lyrically (though I do wish you had posted the lyrics, as I might have been able to give specific feedback about the lyrics.
3) All in all, I like it—Not sure where you ought to “plug it next,” but I think it is quite solid, and I think this song is worth pitching in a number of places, and on a number of levels. I think it’s as solid as any number of rock-n-roll songs I have heard on radio, and I don’t say that lightly.
4) Best wishes in all your songwriting endeavors!!
August 08, 2018