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PHONE ME

Nathan Wall

September 18, 2014

Genre: Pop

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PHONE ME
By Nathan wall

I KNOW WHEN YOUR LONELY YOU PHONE ME
COZ YOU KNOW WHEN YOU WANT SOMEONE TO TELL YOU YOUR BEAUTIFUL
I,M YOU MAN
COZ YOU KNOW WHEN YOU WANT SOMEONE TO TELL YOU EVERYTHING IS ALLRIGHT
WITH THE WORLD
AND ITS A MUCH BETTER PLACE FOR YOU BEING IN IT

I KNOW ITS BEEN A LONG TIME AND I KNOW THAT YOUVE MOVED ON
AND I KNOW THERES STILL A PART OF ME THAT CANT LET GO
SOME PARTIES LAST ALL NIGHT
BUT SOMETIMES WHEN THE SUN COMES UP
YOU CAN FIND YOURSELF FEELING LOW
PICK UP THE PHONE
AND LET ME HEAR YOU SPEAK MY NAME
OH LIFE IS LIKE A CIRCUS
THE HORSES GO ROUND AND ROUND
AND THE TIDES KEEP ON TURNING
AND YOU COULD GO UP OR DOWN
UP HIGH ON YOUR TIGHT ROPE
THE WIND IS RUSHING ROUND
I,LL BE WAITING ON THE GROUND

YOU SAID I HEARD YOU WHEN NO ONE ELSE DID
YOU SAID WE WERE LIKE TOM SAWYER AND HUCKLEBERRY FINN
BUT I MADE A RAFT AND STARTED TO DRIFT
YOU STEPPED ON A SAILBOAT AND WERE AWAY WITH THE WIND
THE DISTANCE BETWEEN US GOT TO WIDE
OH LIFE IS LIKE A WHIRLPOOL THE WATERS GO ROUND AND ROUND
AUTUMN LEAVES ON THE WIND HIT THE GROUND WITHOUT A SOUND
And who knows where they fly 2 and who knows where they land
I,LL BE WAITING ON THE GROUND

I KNOW WHEN YOUR LONELY YOU PHONE ME
COZ YOU KNOW WHEN YOU WANT SOMEONE TO TELL YOU YOUR BEAUTIFUL
I,M YOUr MAN
COZ YOU KNOW WHEN YOU WANT SOMEONE TO TELL YOU EVERYTHING IS ALLRIGHT
WITH THE WORLD
AND ITS A MUCH BETTER PLACE FOR YOU BEING IN IT

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Dennis Field

There’s something very captivating about this. First take is I liked it. Is there anything specific that you want to get feedback on?

September 19, 2014

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PHONE ME
By Nathan wall

I KNOW WHEN YOUR LONLY YOU PHONE ME
COZ YOU KNOW WHEN YOU WANT SOMEONE TO TELL YOU YOUR BEAUTIFUL
I,M YOU MAN
COZ YOU KNOW WHEN YOU WANT SOMEONE TO TELL YOU EVERYTHING IS ALLRIGHT
WITH THE WORLD
AND ITS A MUCH BETTER PLACE FOR YOU BEING IN IT

I KNOW ITS BEEN A LONG TIME AND I KNOW THAT YOUVE MOVED ON
AND I KNOW THERES STILL A PART OF ME THAT CANT LET GO
SOME PARTIES LAST ALL NIGHT
BUT SOMETIMES WHEN THE SUN COMES UP
YOU CAN FIND YOURSELF FEELING LOW
PICK UP THE PHONE
AND LET ME HEAR YOU SPEAK MY NAME
OH LIFE IS LIKE A CIRCUS
THE HORSES GO ROUND AND ROUND
AND THE TIDES KEEP ON TURNING
AND YOU COULD GO UP OR DOWN
UP HIGH ON YOUR TIGHT ROPE
THE WIND IS RUSHING ROUND
I,LL BE WAITING ON THE GROUND

YOU SAID I HEARD YOU WHEN NO ONE ELSE DID
YOU SAID WE WERE LIKE TOM SAWYER AND HUCKLEBERRY FINN
BUT I MADE A RAFT AND STARTED TO DRIFT
YOU STEPPED ON A SAILBOAT AND WERE AWAY WITH THE WIND
THE DISTANCE BETWEEN US GOT TO WIDE
OH LIFE IS LIKE A WIRLPOOL THE WATERS GO ROUND AND ROUND
AUTUMN LEAVES ON THE WIND HIT THE GROUND WITHOUT A SOUND
And who knows where they fly 2 and who knows where they land
I,LL BE WAITING ON THE GROUND

I KNOW WHEN YOUR LONLY YOU PHONE ME
COZ YOU KNOW WHEN YOU WANT SOMEONE TO TELL YOU YOUR BEAUTIFUL
I,M YOUr MAN
COZ YOU KNOW WHEN YOU WANT SOMEONE TO TELL YOU EVERYTHING IS ALLRIGHT
WITH THE WORLD
AND ITS A MUCH BETTER PLACE FOR YOU BEING IN IT

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Dennis Field

There’s something very captivating about this. First take is I liked it. Is there anything specific that you want to get feedback on?

September 19, 2014


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