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Hey You

Patrick Jaouen

August 28, 2014

Genre: Rock

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Hey You
Out there beyond the breakers
Won't you talk with me a while
Stand, sit, dance and smile
What are you waiting on me for.

Are you coming around
Staring down at the ground
Well just lift your head up
Hey You

Hey You
Out there beyond the breakers
Are you worried about the future
I can't take it anymore

Are you coming around
Staring down at the ground
Well just lift your head up
Hey You

Some people you just can't reach
Doesn't mean you should stop sticking out your hand though
Sometimes I wonder
Sometimes I just want to know
Are you worried about the future
I can't take it anymore

Are you coming around
Staring down at the ground
Well just lift your head up
Hey You

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Randall Johns

Very nice, a touch of Dylan and Young. Nice organic lyric. I like it.

August 31, 2014


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Hey You
Out there beyond the breakers
Won't you talk with me a while
Stand, sit, dance and smile
What are you waiting on me for.

Are you coming around
Staring down at the ground
Well just lift your head up
Hey You

Hey You
Out there beyond the breakers
Are you worried about the future
I can't take it anymore

Are you coming around
Staring down at the ground
Well just lift your head up
Hey You

Some people you just can't reach
Doesn't mean you should stop sticking out your hand though
Sometimes I wonder
Sometimes I just want to know
Are you worried about the future
I can't take it anymore

Are you coming around
Staring down at the ground
Well just lift your head up
Hey You

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Randall Johns

Very nice, a touch of Dylan and Young. Nice organic lyric. I like it.

August 31, 2014


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