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Be Amazing

David Tribble

June 12, 2014

Genre: Rock

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This is my Anthem to everyone. Follow you dreams and surround yourself around people that are encouraging and positive.

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Dick Plunk

David - really cool, rocking song. I’d bet that this gets a good crowd response when you play it out. Good production, too.

My only critique point is: I think all your verses (except the first one) are very strong and support your theme of “be amazing and don’t let anyone stop you from being amazing”. But the significance of the first verse (“daisies”, “boy at the front door”) eluded me and seemed like it didn’t fit the theme. It might just be me being obtuse, but I would be interested in what others think.

Good song, though.

June 21, 2014

Dennis Field

Boom! Loving the guitar to this. This has a really cool soundtrack feel to it. I can see this playing in my car on a road trip. I agree with Dick. Can you clarify your thoughts around the first verse and daisies?

Love that “every man woman and child part.” The subtle change in tempo had my leg stomping.

June 22, 2014

David Tribble

First of all thank you for checking out my tune.  Guess I need to post more. 
Ok, so the first verse I admit is a bit hard to connect but here it is. 
Daisies are my wires favorite flower and you can get them in the flower shop and once they are there from the place they grow, a field I think, a boy, man, can use them to give them to the one he loves or even to say I’m sorry.  I know I have been there.  So be amazing in what you do and love.

Hope that helps.  Thanks again, look for more songs soon!
-David

June 22, 2014

Adam Thompson

great song… instantly loved your voice and tone… just my opinion, but in my head the down..down repeating parts would sound even better with a little more melody variation and rising vocal harmonies that build in intensity… I could almost imagine a gospel choir type backing singing sound coming through that part and the chorus.. but anyway… i’m nitpicking.. fantastic job smile

June 27, 2014

Joshua Ingram

Heard the song live Sunday night.  You did a great job.  Congrats on winning the songwriter showdown that night.

July 30, 2014

David Tribble

Thanks Josh!  I should check this more often. Great stuff the other night!

December 31, 2015

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David Tribble

Thanks Adam, a choir would have been the way to go for sure!!

December 31, 2015

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Be Amazing Be Amazing you can make it let those dreams take you
Be Amazing Be Amazing, don't let the sun go down, don't let the sun go down

like the daisies in the field missing nothing but the local flower shop on the countertop orders in
and that boy standing at her front door, reciting what he's sorry for

Be Amazing Be Amazing you can make it let those dreams take you
Be Amazing Be Amazing, don't let the sun go down, don't let the sun go down
down, down down.

Like the stars we gaze upon, oh oh, on a blanket or a parking lot pacing back and forth
looking for reasons as to why, looking for answers to fall right from the sky

Be Amazing Be Amazing you can make it let those dreams take you
Be Amazing Be Amazing, don't let the sun go down, don't let the sun go down

down, down, down, don't let the sun go down, down, down down, don't the the sun go...
Every man woman child boy and girl, don't the sun go down, don't the sun go down.
Every man woman child boy and girl, don't the sun go down, don't the sun go down.

Nobody has the right to scream about how you can't nobody has the right so tell them that you can.Nobody has the right to scream about how you can't nobody has the right so tell them that you can.

Be Amazing Be Amazing you can make it let those dreams take you
Be Amazing Be Amazing, don't let the sun go down, don't let the sun go down
down, down, don't let the sun go down, down, down, yeah yeah.

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Dick Plunk

David - really cool, rocking song. I’d bet that this gets a good crowd response when you play it out. Good production, too.

My only critique point is: I think all your verses (except the first one) are very strong and support your theme of “be amazing and don’t let anyone stop you from being amazing”. But the significance of the first verse (“daisies”, “boy at the front door”) eluded me and seemed like it didn’t fit the theme. It might just be me being obtuse, but I would be interested in what others think.

Good song, though.

June 21, 2014

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Dennis Field

Boom! Loving the guitar to this. This has a really cool soundtrack feel to it. I can see this playing in my car on a road trip. I agree with Dick. Can you clarify your thoughts around the first verse and daisies?

Love that “every man woman and child part.” The subtle change in tempo had my leg stomping.

June 22, 2014

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David Tribble

First of all thank you for checking out my tune.  Guess I need to post more. 
Ok, so the first verse I admit is a bit hard to connect but here it is. 
Daisies are my wires favorite flower and you can get them in the flower shop and once they are there from the place they grow, a field I think, a boy, man, can use them to give them to the one he loves or even to say I’m sorry.  I know I have been there.  So be amazing in what you do and love.

Hope that helps.  Thanks again, look for more songs soon!
-David

June 22, 2014

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Adam Thompson

great song… instantly loved your voice and tone… just my opinion, but in my head the down..down repeating parts would sound even better with a little more melody variation and rising vocal harmonies that build in intensity… I could almost imagine a gospel choir type backing singing sound coming through that part and the chorus.. but anyway… i’m nitpicking.. fantastic job smile

June 27, 2014

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Joshua Ingram

Heard the song live Sunday night.  You did a great job.  Congrats on winning the songwriter showdown that night.

July 30, 2014

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David Tribble

Thanks Josh!  I should check this more often. Great stuff the other night!

December 31, 2015

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David Tribble

Thanks Adam, a choir would have been the way to go for sure!!

December 31, 2015


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