This is a very simple instrumental. I would like to extend it and maybe add some other instrumentation to it. This version came about because a friend was making a collection of tracks that had to be 50 seconds long, so I cut it down to that length.
Thanks, I appreciate that. My thought is to keep the melody very simple, and layer it with something fairly light, like strings or a soft harmonica.
June 05, 2014
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Nice job with the instrumental. I got a feeling of slow wind blowing in a field of flowers. Not sure if that takes you in a direction or not for some additional instruments, but thought I’d give you some feedback.
June 04, 2014
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Thanks, I appreciate that. My thought is to keep the melody very simple, and layer it with something fairly light, like strings or a soft harmonica.
June 05, 2014
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Dennis Field
Nice job with the instrumental. I got a feeling of slow wind blowing in a field of flowers. Not sure if that takes you in a direction or not for some additional instruments, but thought I’d give you some feedback.
June 04, 2014
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