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This song is about my daughters. They are my moon and my stars. They keep me grounded and they provide the greatest sparkle in the darkest of times.
Leave it as an instrumental or lay down a vocal track. What emotion does the listener feel when they hear this song?
Nice melody and beat. Makes one want to move. Takes me to a sunny place.
June 01, 2014
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En el desierto oscuro (In the dark desert)
solo y asustado (alone and afraid)
Mis manos están frías (my hands are cold)
mi cabello está mojado (my hair is wet)
está siempre conmigo (you are always with me)
Luna y estrellas
En la hora más solitaria (In the loneliest hour)
Cuando todo está perdido (when all is lost)
Miro hacia el cielo. (I look up to the sky)
La luz me recuerda el amor (the light reminds me of the love)
que siento por dentro (that I feel inside)
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I’d love to hear it with vocals. I picture it like “trista pena” by the gipsy kings.
May 29, 2014
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Nice melody and beat. Makes one want to move. Takes me to a sunny place.
June 01, 2014
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Matt Rees
I’d love to hear it with vocals. I picture it like “trista pena” by the gipsy kings.
May 29, 2014
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