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Nothing particular, wanted to write a reminiscent type song. Sounds a bit country for how I play
I just want people to evaluate the lyrics, melody and groove.
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Verse One:
Winding down that dirt road, that leads me home
In a truck that seen it's better days
Thinking about my last time with you
Baby I’m amazed
Chorus:
Let's take that trip back to the stars
Let your red hair hang down
Lying on the blanket, looking at the sky
On the outskirts of town
Verse Two:
There ain't a cloud in the sky
Let's laugh like we're young again
Baby there ain’t no reason why
It can’t feel like it did then
Chorus
Bridge
Baby meet me at my gate
I know those stars
Like to stay out late
Chorus
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Julie Field
Nice song Aaron!
May 06, 2014
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