Elvis met Marilyn in the park
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Thanks very much Glen, you are too kind. I guess I am really old too, but that is more conducive to songwriting than the alternative.
March 16, 2014
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I didn’t understand it but I enjoyed it anyway. I think some strong power chords in the background would bring the sound of the song more up to date.(What do I know, I’m old too!) Also some reverb on the vocals might be nice.
March 25, 2014
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Life keeps comin' and comin' Can't get out the way
Just keep runnin' and runnin' From yesterday today
Wishing on a falling star Just to keep the angels reeling
Elvis met Marilyn in the park One warm and sultry evening
Hittin' Vegas hard Been living life the same.
Meetings in the dark Forgetting half the names.
Betting on the Midas touch To give this lie some meaning
Been betting and lyin' so much You lost that golden feeling
Spittin' on a falling star Runnin' instead of kneeling
Elvis met Marilyn in the park And never felt the healing
Hittin' Vegas hard Been living life the same.
Meetings in the dark Forgetting half the names.
© 2014 Mmm... Mullenix Music Machine Lorn Mullenix
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Lorn: if the 60’s come back again, you’re a big star. I love this stuff (all your songs) but, I’m really old.
March 13, 2014
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Thanks very much Glen, you are too kind. I guess I am really old too, but that is more conducive to songwriting than the alternative.
March 16, 2014
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I didn’t understand it but I enjoyed it anyway. I think some strong power chords in the background would bring the sound of the song more up to date.(What do I know, I’m old too!) Also some reverb on the vocals might be nice.
March 25, 2014
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glen king
Lorn: if the 60’s come back again, you’re a big star. I love this stuff (all your songs) but, I’m really old.
March 13, 2014