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Knee Deep In Loving You

Marvin Adcock

March 06, 2019

Genre: Bluegrass

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The world needs more songs that are just plain fun, and this is a bluegrass song that was super fun to write and to watch the session players demo.


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Lee Myers

Marvin,

This is an excellent production expressing a universal emotion: ” I’m in love.”

The song,to me, however, could use better contrast between the sections.  They all sound like they are on the same level melodically.

More importantly, the setup lines proceeding the hook/title line “Knee deep in loving you” could provide stronger support.

Making a few tweaks could improve listener engagement.

All the best.

March 11, 2019

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Marvin Adcock

Thanks Lee for listening, and I appreciate your thoughts.

Berst,
Marvin

March 11, 2019

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Lee Myers

Marvin,

This is an excellent production expressing a universal emotion: ” I’m in love.”

The song,to me, however, could use better contrast between the sections.  They all sound like they are on the same level melodically.

More importantly, the setup lines proceeding the hook/title line “Knee deep in loving you” could provide stronger support.

Making a few tweaks could improve listener engagement.

All the best.

March 11, 2019

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Marvin Adcock

Thanks Lee for listening, and I appreciate your thoughts.

Berst,
Marvin

March 11, 2019


Knee Deep In Loving You

Written by Marvin Adcock

Well I’m knee deep in lovin’ you
I’m yours to do with as you choose
From my particular point of view
Lovin’ you’s so cool
You know how I can’t refuse
Your walk, your talk, and all your moves
And that’s the truth, so help me
I’m knee deep in lovin’ you

There you were, all at once, just enough t’ mess my mind up
And bust all my convictions
Said you won’t miss what you’re missin’ with me, kissin’ on you makes me agree
With all your hot predictions
You’re all I need to know about love
My heart’s made up my mind

Yeah I’m knee deep in lovin’ you
I’m yours to do with as you choose
From my particular point of view
Lovin’ you’s so cool
You know how I can’t refuse
Your walk, your talk, and all your moves
And that’s the truth, so help me
I’m knee deep in lovin’ you

In the book of love on page one is your picture and a bold caption
That says, run in your direction
We’re a lot a like, n’ I like it a lot, I gotta have more of what you’ve got
And I’ll give you my full attention
Cause you’re all I need to know about love
My heart’s made up my mind

Yeah I’m knee deep in lovin’ you
I’m yours to do with as you choose
From my particular point of view
Lovin’ you’s so cool
You know how I can’t refuse
Your walk, your talk, and all your moves
And that’s the truth, so help me
I’m knee deep in lovin’ you
Yeah I'm knee deep in lovin' you
Oh so help me I'm knee deep in lovin' you

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