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Act your age

Daniel Mann

March 02, 2019

Genre: Pop

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I started writing this from my perspective and then halfway through I found out a friend of mine has just moved back to New Zealand after finding that her husband had been having an affair and a complete secret life.

I would love to know if you can tell its written by a male of if it works and it could be written by a female.

I was going for the Julia Michaels - Anxiety type vibe


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Lee Myers

Daniel,

This song has a solid theme—being cheated upon by a loved one. How the singer deals with this situation can separate your song from others that have dealt with this theme.

Here, the singer bounces between being playful(“Mr. Cheater cheater…”), being angry(“act your age”), being thoughtful (“you had a prize…”)

A consistent emotional response by the singer will go a long way towards engaging listeners.

Great start. 

March 10, 2019

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Lee Myers

Daniel,

This song has a solid theme—being cheated upon by a loved one. How the singer deals with this situation can separate your song from others that have dealt with this theme.

Here, the singer bounces between being playful(“Mr. Cheater cheater…”), being angry(“act your age”), being thoughtful (“you had a prize…”)

A consistent emotional response by the singer will go a long way towards engaging listeners.

Great start. 

March 10, 2019


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