I wrote this song as a reminder to all of us that we can be a huge help to family or friends - who may be struggling with a personal challenge at times - when we let them know we support them and are beside them all the way. I discovered a female vocalist with the assistance of my recording engineer who I felt would really let this message flow through a song that could be categorized as Country, or Christian or Inspirational...and I am so pleased with how it came out. I hope you agree.
Please let me know your feedback.
Hey Georg, great message and you are totally right, you’ve a singer here who really let’s it flow - love it - great job! The only thing which maybe a weak point of the song is that your chorus sounds very similar like the verse. A better separation between each part of the song would make it even more interesting. But it’s already nice!
February 20, 2019
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I AM HERE
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1. I have walked - beside you forever -
I know your heart - as well as my own.
I can feel - that something is wrong, though -
You’re carrying a burden alone.
2. Each day - that you’re going through this -
oh the demons – you’ll try to outrun,
will tear you up – deep down inside
until you just want to give up, so…..
CHORUS
Give it to me - I can carry it for you
there is nothing - for you to atone
Just believe - and put that weight on my shoulders
I am here - so you’re never alone.
3. I can feel – through all of your sorrow
you’re in a battle - to save your soul.
Well, I’m here – and I’m ready when you are -
you won’t fight that battle alone, so…
CHORUS
Give it to me - I can carry it for you
there is nothing - for you to atone.
Just believe - and put that weight on my shoulders
I am here - so you’re never alone.
CHORUS
Oh, give it to me - I can carry it for you
there is nothing - for you to atone.
Just believe - and put that weight on my shoulders
I am here - so you’re never alone.
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Hey Georg, great message and you are totally right, you’ve a singer here who really let’s it flow - love it - great job! The only thing which maybe a weak point of the song is that your chorus sounds very similar like the verse. A better separation between each part of the song would make it even more interesting. But it’s already nice!
February 20, 2019
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Chad Sellers
Nice uplifting message and great vocals! Nice work.
February 18, 2019
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