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Jackpot

Frank Renfordt

February 02, 2019

Genre: Country

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Initially I wrote this song around the hook 'Once in a Lifetime Girl'. I got some feedback from publishers and they liked the song but not the hook.That was disappointing and I didn't know what to do. You can change a line - but the hook the whole song is based on?
Some days ago we had Matt in the studio again for 'Hey Girl' and I had the idea to ask him to sing a different hook to the old track. Here is the result.

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I'd love to hear what you think about the song and the new hook 'I hit the jackpot with you girl'


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Dori Weaver

I think the song is spot on.  The chorus has some very visual lyrics and easy to sing along with because they are so memorable.  I am no expert when it comes to country songs but I can only go by what I feel and I love this one…certainly a keeper!  I wish you success with it Frank…..maybe find a different publisher?

February 06, 2019

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Frank Renfordt

Hey Dori, Thank you very much for your kind comment!

February 07, 2019

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Michael Klenda

I like this; very easy to sing to lyrics and uptempo!  Great title.

February 08, 2019

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Michael Klenda

This song is easy to sing along to the lyrics; very uptempo!  Catchy title..

February 08, 2019


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Dori Weaver

I think the song is spot on.  The chorus has some very visual lyrics and easy to sing along with because they are so memorable.  I am no expert when it comes to country songs but I can only go by what I feel and I love this one…certainly a keeper!  I wish you success with it Frank…..maybe find a different publisher?

February 06, 2019

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Frank Renfordt

Hey Dori, Thank you very much for your kind comment!

February 07, 2019

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Michael Klenda

I like this; very easy to sing to lyrics and uptempo!  Great title.

February 08, 2019

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Michael Klenda

This song is easy to sing along to the lyrics; very uptempo!  Catchy title..

February 08, 2019


Have been to Vegas for a dozen times
But never hit a number in my life
Scratched off tickets like a maniac
Desperate to get my slice.
Trying to rise above the ordinary
Lady Luck didn't care about me
Till the day that you showed up
Here by my side

And I can't get my head around it yet
But I guess I won the biggest bet of my life


You're my royal flush in a poker game
My name on the wall in a hall of fame
My sideline ticket for the Super Bowl
My hole in one on a par 5 hole
The needle that I found in a haystack
The Triple Crown Trophy at the horse track
My precious pearl
I hit the jackpot with you girl

Now life feels like a paradise preview
And every time when you enter the room
You make me feel like a billionaire
Smelling your perfume

And I can't get my head around it yet
Finding me with you in a bed on a honeymoon

You're my royal flush in a poker game
My name on the wall in a hall of fame
My sideline ticket for the Super Bowl
My hole in one on a par 5 hole
The needle that I found in a haystack
The Triple Crown Trophy at the horse track
A precious pearl
I hit the jackpot with you girl

Baby the sweetest thing in the world is you
hit the jackpot with you girl


You're my royal flush in a poker game
My name on the wall in a hall of fame
My sideline ticket for the Super Bowl
My hole in one on a par 5 hole
The needle that I found in a haystack
The Triple Crown Trophy at the horse track
You’re my precious pearl

You're my royal flush in a poker game
My name on the wall in a hall of fame
My sideline ticket for the Super Bowl
My hole in one on a par 5 hole
The needle that I found in a haystack
The Triple Crown Trophy at the horse track
A precious pearl
I hit the jackpot with you girl
I hit the jackpot with you girl

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