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Superman

Stephen Winnett

January 30, 2019

Genre: Country

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We all have times when the struggles of life get us down and as a result of that we often make our significant other worry that its about them and so this song is about reassuring them that things will be okay.

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Frank Renfordt

Hey Stephen,  Nice idea and the melody has a nice feel to it. I‘m not sure about the last lines of your chorus. The line ‚I‘ll do everything I can‘ feels a bit compressed and then comes a long break - that throws me off somewhat. Maybe you can tweak the phrasing at the of the chorus to get a better flow. Just my thought. Keep on!

February 04, 2019

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Stephen Winnett

Frank, thank you for your kind words and wisdom. I appreciate that you always take the time to give a thorough review. I hear what you are saying and I’ll have to play around with some options. As always thanks for listening and providing some honest feedback.

February 12, 2019

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Frank Renfordt

Hey Stephen,  Nice idea and the melody has a nice feel to it. I‘m not sure about the last lines of your chorus. The line ‚I‘ll do everything I can‘ feels a bit compressed and then comes a long break - that throws me off somewhat. Maybe you can tweak the phrasing at the of the chorus to get a better flow. Just my thought. Keep on!

February 04, 2019

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Stephen Winnett

Frank, thank you for your kind words and wisdom. I appreciate that you always take the time to give a thorough review. I hear what you are saying and I’ll have to play around with some options. As always thanks for listening and providing some honest feedback.

February 12, 2019


(Verse 1)
Today I'm not as strong as I usually am
Even though I know my problems aint all that big
But its hard to smile or feel like doing anything
When my give a damn is just too tired to give

(Chorus)
I promise you tomorrow that I'll take you by the hand
We'll dance barefoot in the kitchen
I'll make you fall in love again
Tomorrow will be better and I'll be your biggest fan
Today I'm just your Clark Kent but tomorrow
I'll do everything I can, to be your Superman

(Verse 2)
I know that it is hard for you to see me down
But we both know every dog has his day
I guess that it is just my turn to feel the sting of life's burn
but I hope you know that we will be okay

(Chorus)

(Instrumental)

(Chorus)

(Outro)
I'll be your Superman
I'll be your Superman
I'll be your Superman

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