This song has been demoed several times over it's lifetime, but this is the newest rewrite with a completely different and fresh production. It's tough to get a traditional country song picked up by an artist nowadays, so you might as well shoot for the top. I would love to hear Garth sing this one!
I hear George Strait, I guess the problem is getting it to him even though the singer is very good also
March 21, 2019
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Awesome song again Marvin! Loved your lyrics and the melody was perfect for it. Your demo guy did a super job also. I love your work man, keep em coming.
March 25, 2020
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January sixth I’ll never forget
The first time you blessed me with your warm lips
Can't put something like that aside
With a memory like mine
Moved you in March to my postmark
You filled every corner of my trusting heart
Can't put something like that aside
With a memory like mine
With a memory like mine
I have no friend in time
Just the love you left behind
With a memory like mine
From the calendar cube in our bedroom
You wrote on the backside of the twelfth of June
Your broken heart will heal with time
But not with a memory like mine
With a memory like mine
I have no friend in time
Just the love you left behind
With a memory like mine
With a memory like mine
I have no friend in time
There’s no peace of mind
With a memory like mine
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Hey Marvin! Real nice song, pure Country music right there! Lyrics were fantastic. If I was to have any questions about the song it would be, when you mention she wrote on the calendar cube that “your broken heart would heal”, it leaves me wondering, did she know she was going to break your heart and if so, why and how did she do it? Honestly, other than feeling like we should have a little more info as to what happened, I cant say a bad thing about this song. Everything about it was really cool! The singer did an amazing job and has the perfect tone, the music and production was super good! Absolutely fantastic job and I enjoyed listening! Thank you for sharing it with us.
February 01, 2019
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I hear George Strait, I guess the problem is getting it to him even though the singer is very good also
March 21, 2019
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Awesome song again Marvin! Loved your lyrics and the melody was perfect for it. Your demo guy did a super job also. I love your work man, keep em coming.
March 25, 2020
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Hey Marvin! Real nice song, pure Country music right there! Lyrics were fantastic. If I was to have any questions about the song it would be, when you mention she wrote on the calendar cube that “your broken heart would heal”, it leaves me wondering, did she know she was going to break your heart and if so, why and how did she do it? Honestly, other than feeling like we should have a little more info as to what happened, I cant say a bad thing about this song. Everything about it was really cool! The singer did an amazing job and has the perfect tone, the music and production was super good! Absolutely fantastic job and I enjoyed listening! Thank you for sharing it with us.
February 01, 2019
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