I wrote this song for a dear friend who received some tough news from their doctor...
Any feedback is most appreciated...
Thanks so much Russ and Monte…so glad you enjoy this song. I’ve never tried any harmony in the choruses but will now. Much appreciated. George
January 13, 2019
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Hi George, the song has a nice vintage feel. I love the baritone guitar. I think the lyric could use some more images, it’s pretty straightforward and stays at the surface, it doesn’t really touch me.
January 15, 2019
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I like the lyrics and music in this song. I see you are in Lodi…..I am close by, in Lathrop. I am a lyricist, maybe we could meet up and see if cowriting is an option?
February 07, 2019
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Thank you so much Shannon, but I work with my wife on my songs (she helps me talk-through my ideas before I get too far into my lyrics). Best of luck in your writing.
February 11, 2019
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Hold On To Me
© George K. Gibson
1.
I know you worry what your future may hold –
and all the hell you’ll go through.
In the days ahead I want you to know –
I’ll always be here for you.
CHORUS
So hold on - hold on,
hold on to me, baby.
Hold on - hold on,
hold on to me, baby.
2.
Please take my hand, babe, and I want you to know -
that you’ll be mine forever.
I made a promise to you (long time ago) -
that I won’t leave you - ever.
CHORUS
So hold on - hold on,
hold on to me, baby.
Hold on - hold on,
hold on to me, baby.
REFRAIN
Nothing’s harder than to fear the unknown –
these days can pass so slowly.
But deep inside me is a heart that you own –
you’re my one - you’re my one - you’re my one and only.
3.
When hope has faded - and nothing’s gone right -
and your body’s aching.
Just remember my unwavering love -
I’ll always be here waiting.
CHORUS
So hold on - hold on,
Hold on to me, baby.
Hold on - hold on,
Hold on to me, baby.
Yes, hold on - hold on,
Hold on to me, baby.
Hold on - hold on,
Hold on to me, baby.
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Awesome! I was singing the high harmony on the chorus lol. Very catchy
January 13, 2019
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Thanks so much Russ and Monte…so glad you enjoy this song. I’ve never tried any harmony in the choruses but will now. Much appreciated. George
January 13, 2019
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Hi George, the song has a nice vintage feel. I love the baritone guitar. I think the lyric could use some more images, it’s pretty straightforward and stays at the surface, it doesn’t really touch me.
January 15, 2019
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I like the lyrics and music in this song. I see you are in Lodi…..I am close by, in Lathrop. I am a lyricist, maybe we could meet up and see if cowriting is an option?
February 07, 2019
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Thank you so much Shannon, but I work with my wife on my songs (she helps me talk-through my ideas before I get too far into my lyrics). Best of luck in your writing.
February 11, 2019
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nice song
January 13, 2019