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She loves me when I do the chores

Monte Rose

January 02, 2019

Genre: Blues

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This is from Gary Chapman's book "The Five Love Languages". My wife hasn't heard it yet so, we'll see. Hope she approves!


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Brent Baxter

Monte, thanks for sharing your song with us!  I know about the “5 Love Languages.”  Pretty cool, fun idea.  I like the vibe.

Love that you use realistic specifics.  And I like that you set up the “she doesn’t love my body, BUT…” to set up the hook more.

Nice work!  Please take a moment to leave a comment on another writer’s song.  It doesn’t have to be super-detailed or anything.  Just a thought or two about the song.  (Also, the best way to GET feedback is to GIVE feedback.)  Thanks!

January 04, 2019

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Uncle Brent ...

Man, I love this song ... And it’s so TRUE when you’ve been in a relationship for a while. So, has anyone cut and/or released this song?

February 09, 2021

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She loves me when I...

Written by Monte Rose

I'll take the garbage out and bring the dog back in
I'll fix the fence and clean the closet again
She don't love my body but she loves me when I do the chores

I'll make the bed and the breakfast too
I'll clean the kitchen and run the vacuum
She don't love my body but she loves me when I do the chores

When I prance around in my silky boxer shorts
She rolls her eyes and walks away
but there's somethin' about me sweepin' off the porch
she gets that look in her eye and I know it's time to play!

I fill her car up with gasoline
That's one more thing that convinces me
She don't love my body but she loves me when I do the chores


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Brent Baxter

Monte, thanks for sharing your song with us!  I know about the “5 Love Languages.”  Pretty cool, fun idea.  I like the vibe.

Love that you use realistic specifics.  And I like that you set up the “she doesn’t love my body, BUT…” to set up the hook more.

Nice work!  Please take a moment to leave a comment on another writer’s song.  It doesn’t have to be super-detailed or anything.  Just a thought or two about the song.  (Also, the best way to GET feedback is to GIVE feedback.)  Thanks!

January 04, 2019

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Uncle Brent ...

Man, I love this song ... And it’s so TRUE when you’ve been in a relationship for a while. So, has anyone cut and/or released this song?

February 09, 2021


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