A song I started writing in a more pop country sound that Deema Homsi and I worked on.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
I am looking for this to be a pop/country song tell me how you think it works or not.
Great song Tony! I like what you do with the 2nd half of the verses, and your guitar work is amazing!
December 06, 2018
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Verse 1
All week we work and slave - 6
To make our way in this rat race - 8
That nine to five is killing me, time for us to be getgone - 15
But now it’s only mid-weeky - 8
Two more days till you and me -7
Are free to do what we love and be where we belong -14
Pre-Chorus 1
Time for some top down, we don’t care where we’re bound -11
Pull the tarp way back, show the world our Cadillac – 12
Chorus
Pump up the radio, we’re good to go - 10
Nothin’ like the weekend, girlfriend - 8
Freein’ your mind, body and soul - 8
With your cruisin’ cowboy - 6
Ridin’ with the top down, feelin’ so alive - 10
Let our hearts be our guide - 6
Come on relax and take back control - 6
With your cruisin’ cowboy - 6
Verse 2
You snuggle up beside me - 7
We got everything that we need - 8
No crackin’ maps, drivin’ through, area code still unknown - 15
The dashboard hula girl’s wigglin’ - 10
Two more days the clock starts tickin’ - 8
The thrill of what this weekend brings (for) you and me alone - Best line?
Pre- Chorus 2
Our Caddy’s roarin’ loud, floatin’ on a dust cloud
Eldorado ‘76, she can pack quite a kick
Chorus X 2
Pump up the radio, we’re good to go - 10
Nothin’ like the weekend, girlfriend - 8
Freein’ your mind, body and soul - 8
With your cruisin’ cowboy - 6
Ridin’ with the top down, feelin’ so alive - 10
Let our hearts be our guide - 6
Come on relax and take back control - 6
With your cruisin’ cowboy - 6
© Dec/2018, Tony True & Deema Homsi
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Probably a great throwback to the 70’s or the 80’s which is fine I got the same feedback from a Publisher..Great Guitar work
December 06, 2018
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Great song Tony! I like what you do with the 2nd half of the verses, and your guitar work is amazing!
December 06, 2018
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Joseph Guerra
Probably a great throwback to the 70’s or the 80’s which is fine I got the same feedback from a Publisher..Great Guitar work
December 06, 2018
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