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Wrote this track with Murray Daigle and Jonathan Pike. Its meant to be a pop song but I just wanted to do a stripped down piano version.
Just looking for overall reaction and feel.
Thanks Bob for the feedback - appreciate it. Its funny about consonants - in classical and competition singing I have been taught to enunciate the consonants but most producers I have worked with tell me to soften them to sound more pop. I actually prefer somewhere in the middle. Thanks so much again for talking the time to listen and comment, its appreciated.
November 01, 2018
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I think this is a very nice song, but wish I could see the lyrics, because as a musician I get so distracted listening to your great voice, and cool keyboard playing. So I don’t really know what your song is about, but I love the sound of it, and the music and your voice are captivating.
Great job!
November 12, 2018
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HI Reid -thanks for the taking the time to listen - I will post lyrics to “Say” thanks for the suggestion.
November 15, 2018
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Sounds a bit haunting. Definitely a song that could do well stripped down like this or with more elaborate production. It is very suspenseful. Your vocals are so beautiful, I had to listen twice. It could easily be placed in a dramatic/romantic film.
December 12, 2018
Thanks Haydee for checking out the song -I am glad you liked it - its a rough recording and I do have a stripped down version somewhere - I will try to send a link to it. https://soundcloud.com/mikalynmusic/say-acoustic-mikalyn - I will pop over and check out your songs as well Haydee
thanks
Mikalyn
December 12, 2018
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1) You have a pleasing voice and 2) your vocal intonation is pretty solid—enunciation if problematic (your vowels sound good, but initial and final consonants in words get somewhat lost, so it makes it more difficult to make out your lyrics)—wish you had included the lyrics with your song. Piano part is a little “pedestrian” (chords a little common and formulaic). But you 1) LOOK GOOD, and 2) YOUR VOICE IS PLEASING (you SOUND good)—and those two qualities will help to make up for any small shortcomings. Best wishes in all your musical endeavors (and sorry if I seemed to come down a little bit too “harsh” on your song—“harshness” wasn’t my aim, but simply honest feedback, and I hope things DO go well with your songwriting)!!!
October 31, 2018
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Thanks Bob for the feedback - appreciate it. Its funny about consonants - in classical and competition singing I have been taught to enunciate the consonants but most producers I have worked with tell me to soften them to sound more pop. I actually prefer somewhere in the middle. Thanks so much again for talking the time to listen and comment, its appreciated.
November 01, 2018
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I think this is a very nice song, but wish I could see the lyrics, because as a musician I get so distracted listening to your great voice, and cool keyboard playing. So I don’t really know what your song is about, but I love the sound of it, and the music and your voice are captivating.
Great job!
November 12, 2018
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HI Reid -thanks for the taking the time to listen - I will post lyrics to “Say” thanks for the suggestion.
November 15, 2018
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Sounds a bit haunting. Definitely a song that could do well stripped down like this or with more elaborate production. It is very suspenseful. Your vocals are so beautiful, I had to listen twice. It could easily be placed in a dramatic/romantic film.
December 12, 2018
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Thanks Haydee for checking out the song -I am glad you liked it - its a rough recording and I do have a stripped down version somewhere - I will try to send a link to it. https://soundcloud.com/mikalynmusic/say-acoustic-mikalyn - I will pop over and check out your songs as well Haydee
thanks
Mikalyn
December 12, 2018
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1) You have a pleasing voice and 2) your vocal intonation is pretty solid—enunciation if problematic (your vowels sound good, but initial and final consonants in words get somewhat lost, so it makes it more difficult to make out your lyrics)—wish you had included the lyrics with your song. Piano part is a little “pedestrian” (chords a little common and formulaic). But you 1) LOOK GOOD, and 2) YOUR VOICE IS PLEASING (you SOUND good)—and those two qualities will help to make up for any small shortcomings. Best wishes in all your musical endeavors (and sorry if I seemed to come down a little bit too “harsh” on your song—“harshness” wasn’t my aim, but simply honest feedback, and I hope things DO go well with your songwriting)!!!
October 31, 2018
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