When leaving is the only right choice.
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Verse 1:
I left you standing there as I walked away
You made your mind when you took those vows
So what else should I do?
Beg you to love me on my knees?
Chorus:
This is my final turn away from you
’Cause I know I can’t stand any thought of you
Out of sight, out of mind finds me stronger than ever
Oh oh oh, these wheels heals me
Verse 2:
I know we need these miles between us
’Cause I just keep seeing that picture on my mind
You, your church and bride to be
Makes me only sick
Chorus x 1
Bridge:
So what in the world do you want from me
Chorus x 1
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Noora, I am guessing (1) from your name, and 2) from the song title, that English is not necessarily your first language—When you title the song “These Wheels Heals Me,” you are mixing “singular and plural”—in other words, you would say “These Wheels Heal Me” or “This Wheel Heals Me.” Hope that makes sense.
Best wishes in all your songwriting endeavors!
October 31, 2018
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Bob Abner
Noora, I am guessing (1) from your name, and 2) from the song title, that English is not necessarily your first language—When you title the song “These Wheels Heals Me,” you are mixing “singular and plural”—in other words, you would say “These Wheels Heal Me” or “This Wheel Heals Me.” Hope that makes sense.
Best wishes in all your songwriting endeavors!
October 31, 2018
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