This is a first time co-write between myself and co-writer, Betty Miller. Betty had a cut by Charlie Pride a while back, and she's also one of the founding members of our local songwriter's association. It was a real honor when she came to me, handed me a lyric sheet and said, "I think you can help me with this song." She already wrote the lyrics, but needed someone to put music and melody to it. I went into my home studio and what you hear are my thoughts on the music and melody. I am also the vocalist on this one.
General song & production feedback welcome!
Nice idea/hook and vocals! I really like ‘perfection in blue jeans.’
Good Job
September 25, 2018
Thanks guys for your feedback. Frank, I do think this classifies as a country pop sound. Maybe not in the ‘traditional’ way though. LOL. I did do the recording on my own. Betty wrote the lyrics, I created the music and melody line. So happy you liked it. I’ve been working hard on my production and playing skills.
Chad… that line “prefection in blue jeans” seems to be a favorite. Betty wrote great lyrics for this song.
Thank you both for listening and commenting! I appreciate it.
September 26, 2018
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Sorry… correction: “perfection in blue jeans” LOL. Can’t spell today.
September 26, 2018
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You're a chapter of my life I'd love to live again
I'd turn the pages real slow from beginning to the end
When I heard you were still in town I couldn't believe my heart
So I thought I would just stop by to see how you are
I can see how you are
Perfection in blue jeans
Smiling hello
Inviting me in
See how you are
Love is starting all over
Just one look at you and I'm falling again
I knew our dreams would take us on our separate ways
though we were so much in love in our younger days
I went out and hung the moon and brought you back a shooting star
And I thought I would just stop by to see how you are
I can see how you are
Perfection in blue jeans
Smiling hello
Inviting me in
See how you are
Love is starting all over
Just one look at you and I'm falling again
Just look at us we are falling
Just look at us we are falling
Just look at us we are falling again
We are falling again
See how you are
Love is starting all over
Just one look at you and I'm falling again
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WOW - great job! This is really cool. You did this all by yourself? Awesome! I like the song, the production and especially your vocals. However it doesn’t sound much like a Country song, I’m not sure for which genre you are aiming here.
September 25, 2018
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Nice idea/hook and vocals! I really like ‘perfection in blue jeans.’
Good Job
September 25, 2018
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Thanks guys for your feedback. Frank, I do think this classifies as a country pop sound. Maybe not in the ‘traditional’ way though. LOL. I did do the recording on my own. Betty wrote the lyrics, I created the music and melody line. So happy you liked it. I’ve been working hard on my production and playing skills.
Chad… that line “prefection in blue jeans” seems to be a favorite. Betty wrote great lyrics for this song.
Thank you both for listening and commenting! I appreciate it.
September 26, 2018
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Sorry… correction: “perfection in blue jeans” LOL. Can’t spell today.
September 26, 2018
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Frank Renfordt
WOW - great job! This is really cool. You did this all by yourself? Awesome! I like the song, the production and especially your vocals. However it doesn’t sound much like a Country song, I’m not sure for which genre you are aiming here.
September 25, 2018