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Hey Ghost

Sam Wood

September 24, 2018

Genre: Pop

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I hope it's ok to post a song in progress for feedback. I wrote this over the weekend and recorded it (up to the bridge) last night. I'm kind of excited about it and would love to hear what others think. Thank you so much!!!

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Because it's not done, I'm looking for some general feedback about the song overall and what I can do to improve it. Thank you!!


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Lisa Caterbone

I think you’ve hit the nail on the head with a modern production sound and I really love your voice, Sam. I think this song fits more into a pop genre, than country. Not sure what genre you were hoping to place it in. But, as far as the lyrics go. Who is the ghost? That’s my main question. You seem to be asking a spirit about your life, but not sure where the connection is between you and the ghost. I really like the melody and music. Just not sure about the lyrical storyline.

September 25, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

Hi Sam, I think you are on a good way here. I like this ghost idea, it’s original and I don’t mind that you keep it a little vague, I think that is common in the Pop genre. Cool song!

September 25, 2018

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Lisa Caterbone

I think you’ve hit the nail on the head with a modern production sound and I really love your voice, Sam. I think this song fits more into a pop genre, than country. Not sure what genre you were hoping to place it in. But, as far as the lyrics go. Who is the ghost? That’s my main question. You seem to be asking a spirit about your life, but not sure where the connection is between you and the ghost. I really like the melody and music. Just not sure about the lyrical storyline.

September 25, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

Hi Sam, I think you are on a good way here. I like this ghost idea, it’s original and I don’t mind that you keep it a little vague, I think that is common in the Pop genre. Cool song!

September 25, 2018


Hey Ghost

Hey, Ghost
Where do we go from here?
Hey, Ghost
Why is there so much fear?

You saw it all before.
Now you hide behind the door.

Hey, Ghost
Will I be in love?
Hey, Ghost
Is there a God above?

You saw it all before.
Now you hide behind the door.

Why am I here?
The future is so unclear
Respectfully,
I’m looking for the answers to the questions
Can’t you see
Hey Ghost it’s me

Hey Ghost
Who did you used to be?
Hey Ghost
Why are you haunting me?

Why am I here?
The future is so unclear
Respectfully,
I’m looking for the answers to the questions
Can’t you see
Hey Ghost it’s me

All alone and seeing things
secrets whispered, make the voices stop
Something out of Stephen King
I really think I may be cracking up

Imagination Apparition
Something in the night goes bump
Stranger things stranger stranger
I really think I may be cracking up

Hey Ghost
Who did you used to be?
Hey Ghost
Why are you haunting me?
You saw it all before
Now you hide behind the door

Why am I here?
The future is so unclear
Respectfully,
I’m looking for the answers to the questions
Can’t you see
Hey Ghost it’s me

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