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You’re My Perfect Day

Mary Segato

September 10, 2013

Genre: Country

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Hi everyone, was wondering if you think this track is slightly distorted or loud?


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Dennis Field

Mary,

I do think the track does feel a bit distorted/loud. However, this has really classic flare to it for some reason. It reminds me a bit like the song “Last Kiss”. The way the verses transition into the chorus and things. I think it may be the drum beat that gives it that. If you tweak the guitars I think this could sounds really nice. I will say I was not focussing much on the lyrics simply because you asked for feedback on the track. I hope this helps!

September 11, 2013

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Mary Segato

Thanks for your insight Dennis.

September 12, 2013

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Dennis Field

Happy to give feedback!

October 01, 2013

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You’re My Perfect Day

Written by Mary Segato

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Dennis Field

Mary,

I do think the track does feel a bit distorted/loud. However, this has really classic flare to it for some reason. It reminds me a bit like the song “Last Kiss”. The way the verses transition into the chorus and things. I think it may be the drum beat that gives it that. If you tweak the guitars I think this could sounds really nice. I will say I was not focussing much on the lyrics simply because you asked for feedback on the track. I hope this helps!

September 11, 2013

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Mary Segato

Thanks for your insight Dennis.

September 12, 2013

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Dennis Field

Happy to give feedback!

October 01, 2013


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