What is the Holy Spirit? Like a breeze through an open window.
Give it to me straight. What do you like? What makes you cringe?
I haven't posted in a while. Just finished this and thought I'd upload it and see how it flies.
Unusual structure - C C V V C
I'm sure you'll never hear this on Christian Radio!
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CHORUS
You're like a breeze through an open window
Curtains blowing
You touch my cheek
You're like a breeze and I don't know
Where you're going
As you swirl around me.
V1
I can feel you
But I can't touch you
I don't see you
But you're still here
The breath of night sighs your name
V2
Your eyes - a crosswind
My mind - a whirlwind
Like a cyclone you wreck my heart
The breath of night sighs your name
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