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A Breeze Through an Open Window

Martin Vipond

August 06, 2018

Genre: Rock

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What is the Holy Spirit? Like a breeze through an open window.








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I haven't posted in a while. Just finished this and thought I'd upload it and see how it flies.


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A Breeze Through an Open...

Written by Martin Vipond

CHORUS
You're like a breeze through an open window
Curtains blowing
You touch my cheek
You're like a breeze and I don't know
Where you're going
As you swirl around me.

V1
I can feel you
But I can't touch you
I don't see you
But you're still here
The breath of night sighs your name

V2
Your eyes - a crosswind
My mind - a whirlwind
Like a cyclone you wreck my heart
The breath of night sighs your name

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