Written with good friend Jerry Barlow. Song is a sad song that turns into an uptempo type Chorus.
I think it works, but would welcome some comments.
Thank you Leslie. Very nice to hear. I will check out some of yours.
Brian
August 11, 2018
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What Did You Do To The Rain
I remember those cold rainy days
That fireside love we made
I felt so warm and safe
With the storm just a heartbeat away
Now when clouds fill the sky
Fear starts to fill my mind
What made you say goodbye
And what did you do to the rain
What did you do to the laughter we knew
As the rain softly fell from the sky
I can’t help but wonder, why the lightning and thunder
Never scared me till you said goodbye
And where are the rainbows, after the rain goes
I wish you’d come back and explain
What did you do to the love that we knew
And what did you do to the rain
Dark skies meant a night in your arms
Making love and loving the storms
Long walks as a rainy day dawned
But these days it’s just not the same
Now when it starts to rain
All I can feel is the pain
What made your feelings change
And what did you do to the rain
Repeat chorus:
Did you cast a spell on the sky
Or curse this poor heart of mine
Please come back and love it away
I can’t stand not standing the rain
Repeat Chorus:
Writers: Brian Robinson/Jerry Barlow
©2014 Jejajo Music (ASCAP)
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Hi Brian I loved the song it was warm and touching great lyrics great job
August 08, 2018
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Thank you Leslie. Very nice to hear. I will check out some of yours.
Brian
August 11, 2018
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Leslie Wade
Hi Brian I loved the song it was warm and touching great lyrics great job
August 08, 2018
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