This song was conceived at the funeral of a 1 month old little girl... At the ceremony I scribbled the line "life is fragile" on her picture and it turned into this song several years later.
I would like to know general thoughts. Thank you!
Hi Melanie - I love your delicate voice, it fits wonderful to this emotional song. Thanks for sharing!
August 02, 2018
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1) Nice intriguing song. 2) Wish you had posted the lyrics (imho, allows the listener to be more connected to both the lyrics and the music). 3) Occasionally, small problems with vocal intonation (a little flat vocally). 4) I DID like your song—best wishes with your musical endeavors/songwriting.
July 31, 2018
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Hi Melanie - I love your delicate voice, it fits wonderful to this emotional song. Thanks for sharing!
August 02, 2018
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1) Nice intriguing song. 2) Wish you had posted the lyrics (imho, allows the listener to be more connected to both the lyrics and the music). 3) Occasionally, small problems with vocal intonation (a little flat vocally). 4) I DID like your song—best wishes with your musical endeavors/songwriting.
July 31, 2018
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