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Life Is Fragile

Melanie Shenberger

July 29, 2018

Genre: Pop

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This song was conceived at the funeral of a 1 month old little girl... At the ceremony I scribbled the line "life is fragile" on her picture and it turned into this song several years later.

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Bob Abner

1) Nice intriguing song. 2) Wish you had posted the lyrics (imho, allows the listener to be more connected to both the lyrics and the music). 3) Occasionally, small problems with vocal intonation (a little flat vocally). 4) I DID like your song—best wishes with your musical endeavors/songwriting.

July 31, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

Hi Melanie - I love your delicate voice, it fits wonderful to this emotional song. Thanks for sharing!

August 02, 2018

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Jessica McCale

I loved it

August 02, 2018

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Leslie Wade

Hi Melanie that was a Beautiful song loved the lyrics great job

August 08, 2018

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Bob Abner

1) Nice intriguing song. 2) Wish you had posted the lyrics (imho, allows the listener to be more connected to both the lyrics and the music). 3) Occasionally, small problems with vocal intonation (a little flat vocally). 4) I DID like your song—best wishes with your musical endeavors/songwriting.

July 31, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

Hi Melanie - I love your delicate voice, it fits wonderful to this emotional song. Thanks for sharing!

August 02, 2018

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Jessica McCale

I loved it

August 02, 2018

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Leslie Wade

Hi Melanie that was a Beautiful song loved the lyrics great job

August 08, 2018


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