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I Need You More (feat. Marq DeSouza)

Allen Dickinson

July 26, 2018

Genre: Rock

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This a song about trying to rekindle a lost love.

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General feedback of song and structure, how the mix is would be helpful as well


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Reid Yamamoto

Wow, really great song Allen! I love the lyrics/message, and the guitars and arrangement and production quality. You have a really great voice too!

August 01, 2018

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Allen Dickinson

Thank you so much Reid I really appreciate it.

August 01, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

I like the fat sound - cool Rock song. The mix is good, maybe the vocals are a little bit too upfront for a Rock song (1-2 db). Some harmonies in the chorus would help to make it more stand out. Good work!

August 02, 2018

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I Need You More (feat....

Written by Allen Dickinson

When I met you at the station, I wasn’t quite prepared, The bus was late, but my heart was racing,
I just don’t know if I can go through this again

Pre-Chorus
And now at last I hope I’ll find, if it was meant to be or just another thing left behind

Chorus
I need you more than yesterday, and a little less than tomorrow,
I need you more than words can say, love’s ours to take before it slips away

When I met you at the cafe, to catch up on the past, You were there but your eyes were so far away, And the question about us remained unasked

Pre-Chorus
Now I can’t go another day, without knowing if loves lost, or if you’re here to stay

Chorus
I need you more than yesterday, and a little less than tomorrow,
I need you more than words can say, love’s ours to take before it slips away

Bridge
Now I know that our love, will forever remain in our hearts,
But now I know that we’ve grown, and what we once had will never be again,
Be a part of you

Now I leave you at the station, one last kiss for for all good times,
I bid you well towards your next destination, but I just can’t find the words to say goodbye

Pre-Chorus
I feel a big piece of my heart, has gone away, and never to return

Chorus
I need you more than yesterday, and a little less than tomorrow,
I need you more than words can say, for without there’s only sorrow
I need you more than yesterday, and a little less than tomorrow,
I need you more than words can say, it was our to take, but now it’s slipped away

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Reid Yamamoto

Wow, really great song Allen! I love the lyrics/message, and the guitars and arrangement and production quality. You have a really great voice too!

August 01, 2018

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Allen Dickinson

Thank you so much Reid I really appreciate it.

August 01, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

I like the fat sound - cool Rock song. The mix is good, maybe the vocals are a little bit too upfront for a Rock song (1-2 db). Some harmonies in the chorus would help to make it more stand out. Good work!

August 02, 2018


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