From my hook book; light romantic, nothing deep at all.
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MISSISSIPPI MISS
She came from Pascagoula lips like honeydew
Blew into Tennessee last October, beneath a harvest moon
Sister said I had to meet her, introduced her to me
Now she’s all I can think about, my red hot delta queen
She’s my MISSISSIPPI MISS
With a smile that sets me flyin’
Got a sweet magnolia kiss
She’s my MISSISSIPPI MISS
Last night I took her to my favorite watering hole
She impressed my friends so much, they thought I’d struck gold
She lit up the dance floor, like a stick of dynamite
All the guys around put their bottles down, could not believe their eyes
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She mesmerizes me with that drawl
It’s so easy to see how I could fall for my
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©2016 Ric & Fayth Kirk all rights reserved
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Hi Kirk, I like the hook, nice wordplay.
I think if you produce this one really well, you could get more out of it. I like this western style bass run at the end of the chorus. Well done.
July 13, 2018
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Frank Renfordt
Hi Kirk, I like the hook, nice wordplay.
I think if you produce this one really well, you could get more out of it. I like this western style bass run at the end of the chorus. Well done.
July 13, 2018
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