A praise song about our Heavenly Father.
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I love the chorus. It had a soaring quality . Something about the melody in the verses did not seem to blend with the chorus . There has to be a way to tweak that a bit because the chorus was just like :0 so good 
It just needs a little more flow. I looooove the melody in the chorus .
July 17, 2018
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Verse 1:
Jesus forgive me, for I stray everyday
Help me understand your way, God's way
So Heavenly
Chorus:
Father, I know there is more to life than I can see
Father, re-maker of my heart is beautiful and amazing
Father, when unknowing me, you know me completely
Father, the anchor in my soul, you make me a better me
Verse 2:
Jesus your life guards and is guiding me
As you show me the right path I need
So Heavenly
Chorus
Bridge:
Heavenly Father, you have enlightened me
Heavenly Father, you care, care for me
So Heavenly
Chorus
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Hi, Ani! Thanks for sharing your song with us. I tell ya, the line “re-maker of my heart” stood out to me the most (in a good way). I’d be interested in seeing how you’d build a song around that concept- how Jesus will “cleanse” your heart and “renew a right spirit” within you. I find that thought intriguing.
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June 26, 2018
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I love the chorus. It had a soaring quality . Something about the melody in the verses did not seem to blend with the chorus . There has to be a way to tweak that a bit because the chorus was just like :0 so good It just needs a little more flow. I looooove the melody in the chorus .
July 17, 2018
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Hi, Ani! Thanks for sharing your song with us. I tell ya, the line “re-maker of my heart” stood out to me the most (in a good way). I’d be interested in seeing how you’d build a song around that concept- how Jesus will “cleanse” your heart and “renew a right spirit” within you. I find that thought intriguing.
Hope that helps! Please pay it forward by leaving a comment on another writer’s song. Thanks!
June 26, 2018
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