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Temptation

Debbie Convoy

June 11, 2018

Genre: Country

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She's always been the "good girl" . She's always done what she's supposed to..............but...........
not tonight!!


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Ditalian Cole

Nice groove. Reminds me of the country songs of yesterday. Listening, Diamond Rio popped in my head, for some reason. Lyrically, the song doesn’t break any new ground, but it’s still good. Also, you used your hook/title in your first verse. I suggest you have it in the chorus only.

June 13, 2018

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Debbie Convoy

Thank you Ditalian for taking the time to listen and for your great feedback!

June 13, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

Cool Country Rock - very good for a live presentation!
Could be a song for Sunny Sweeney, she has songs like this on her album ‘Provoked’

June 14, 2018

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Debbie Convoy

Thank you for your feedback Frank! Sunny would be awesome!!

June 14, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

I loved this song from the beginning to the end..I hear Miranda or better yet Carrie Underwood “Maybe next time He’ll think before he cheats”

July 31, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

By the way Carrie, your Bio says you got a new Guitar for Christmas what did you get and I see I called you Carrie..WOW I guess that song really affected me Debbie

July 31, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

I guess it was one of those Freudian thingys

July 31, 2018

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Debbie Convoy

Joseph, I truly appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment. I’m glad you liked it!!

August 02, 2018

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Ditalian Cole

Nice groove. Reminds me of the country songs of yesterday. Listening, Diamond Rio popped in my head, for some reason. Lyrically, the song doesn’t break any new ground, but it’s still good. Also, you used your hook/title in your first verse. I suggest you have it in the chorus only.

June 13, 2018

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Debbie Convoy

Thank you Ditalian for taking the time to listen and for your great feedback!

June 13, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

Cool Country Rock - very good for a live presentation!
Could be a song for Sunny Sweeney, she has songs like this on her album ‘Provoked’

June 14, 2018

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Debbie Convoy

Thank you for your feedback Frank! Sunny would be awesome!!

June 14, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

I loved this song from the beginning to the end..I hear Miranda or better yet Carrie Underwood “Maybe next time He’ll think before he cheats”

July 31, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

By the way Carrie, your Bio says you got a new Guitar for Christmas what did you get and I see I called you Carrie..WOW I guess that song really affected me Debbie

July 31, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

I guess it was one of those Freudian thingys

July 31, 2018

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Debbie Convoy

Joseph, I truly appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment. I’m glad you liked it!!

August 02, 2018


‘Temptation’
by
Danielle Clashman & Debbie Convoy
debsk8r@aol.com
soundcloud.com/debbie-convoy

Looking for a little temptation
I’m tired of staying home
Tired of all the frustration
And I’m tired of being alone
Guess it’s time I give it up
Head over to the Lost and Found
Have myself a drink or two
And take a look around

I got a little temptation
Oh honey..what did I see?
A steel blue eyed, hunk of something, starring at me..Temptation!!!

Now come on Mister..show me what you got
You better finish that beer, cause things are gonna get hot
I was ready to just cut loose
When he took my by the hand
Now, what have I got to lose?
Ya know, it’s only a dance.

Chorus
Got a little temptation..it’s getting the best of me
Yea, his rough and ragged edges
are making me weak..Temptation!!!

Bridge
It’s 2am..do I leave or stay?
Cause every time I look at him, it takes my breath away

Losing my reservations
Cause, boy you are so fine
Won’t ya give me one good reason
Why I shouldn’t cross the line
You got me asking questions
I don’t have the answer to
There’s no doubt in my mind
Ain’t never met a man like you

Got a little temptation..it’s getting the best of me
Yea, those rough and ragged edges are making me weak.. Temptation!!……Temptation!!...... Oh yea…..

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