What you would say if you only had a little time left and since we are all only hear for a little while might as well say it now
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THE WIDER VIEW
By Happy Ron and Freebo 8/28/2012
Tempo 90
My life is ticking down
It’s not what I would choose
I hear your saddened sound
Of all that you might lose
(But) before I leave this life
I give this gift to you
And hope that you will see The Wider View
Will you see the wider view
And paint the way with me
Your canvas won't quite so blue
If you don't MAKE IT BE
THE COLORS are unknown
But YOU won't paint alone
If YOU chose to see the wider view
It's just a part of life
We’re only here a while
We made the best of everything
ALWAYS TRIED TO SMILE
And all the joyous times
You painted on my face
Twas was you who made me better with your grace
REPEAT CHORUS
Soon I will be gone
One last song to sing
And maybe that’s the way
TO GIVE BACK everything
and I hope that YOU'LL REMEMBER THAT WHAT I SAY IS TRUE
And you will see me in your wider view.
REPEAT CHORUS
Yes OUR colors are unknown
But we don't paint alone
When we choose.... to see the wider view.
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Hello Ronald, this is a thoughtful song, in the tradition of great songwriters. As a genre you mentioned Country, but I don’t think it has much to do with Country. Apart from that I have nothing to criticize, the song stands for itself.
June 09, 2018
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Frank Renfordt
Hello Ronald, this is a thoughtful song, in the tradition of great songwriters. As a genre you mentioned Country, but I don’t think it has much to do with Country. Apart from that I have nothing to criticize, the song stands for itself.
June 09, 2018
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