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MAY 32ND

Ditalian Cole

June 04, 2018

Genre: Country

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Frank Renfordt

Hi Ditalien, interesting title and cool idea, production sounds also great. I’m not sure if this fits into todays country market, it may sound too much different from what you hear on the radio. Also the chorus could stand out a bit more, the vocal range is quite limited.
But overall a cool song. Good luck.

June 09, 2018

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Jack Speer

Ditalian, I apologize for being so long in responding to your song…  I really like this song, especially the guitar riff that kicks it off in the intro, as well as throughout the song.  I like the lyric a lot, too.  Are you performing the vocals?  Nice job!

June 15, 2018

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Dori Weaver

Like the groove!  It’s refreshing to hear a vocal where every word is clear and understood.  Nice job!

June 19, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

Hi Ditalien, interesting title and cool idea, production sounds also great. I’m not sure if this fits into todays country market, it may sound too much different from what you hear on the radio. Also the chorus could stand out a bit more, the vocal range is quite limited.
But overall a cool song. Good luck.

June 09, 2018

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Jack Speer

Ditalian, I apologize for being so long in responding to your song…  I really like this song, especially the guitar riff that kicks it off in the intro, as well as throughout the song.  I like the lyric a lot, too.  Are you performing the vocals?  Nice job!

June 15, 2018

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Dori Weaver

Like the groove!  It’s refreshing to hear a vocal where every word is clear and understood.  Nice job!

June 19, 2018


VERSE 1
I'm as high as a cloud
I'm cruising through the sky
Having your gorgeous body
To be one with every night
You're my dream when I'm sleeping
And the smile through my workday
The last thing I wanna do
Is throw it all away

CHORUS
When May 32nd comes
That will be the day I leave you
When May 32nd comes
That's when I'll find somebody new
When there's thirteen months in a year
That's when my love will disappear
I'll break your heart and tell you we're done
When May 32nd comes

VERSE 2
You're sweeter than the chocolates
I give on Valentine's
You're kisses light me up
Like the Fourth of July
You make the hard times softer
And show me what love is
We're meant to be together
Like a watch and a wrist

CHORUS
When May 32nd comes
That will be the day I leave you
When May 32nd comes
That's when I'll find somebody new
When there's thirteen months in a year
That's when my love will disappear
I'll break your heart and tell you we're done
When May 32nd comes

BRIDGE
You're not the rule, you're the exception
You're walking, talking perfection

CHORUS
When May 32nd comes
That will be the day I leave you
When May 32nd comes
That's when I'll find somebody new
When there's thirteen months in a year
That's when my love will disappear
I'll break your heart and tell you we're done

When May 32nd comes
That will be the day I leave you
When May 32nd comes
That's when I'll find somebody new
When there's thirteen months in a year
That's when my love will disappear
I'll break your heart and tell you we're done
When May 32nd comes
When May 32nd comes
When May 32nd comes
When May 32nd comes



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