Two people started dating and the girl was always ready to go home after the date, the man would ask her to stay every time, this song is from his point of view , told by her. Two people who want to be together but are afraid of becoming attached,
Does it need more depth? Longer verses or a bigger chorus? Recomendations welcome!
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Alone Tonight
Turn Off The Lights, keep the curtains drawn
Might not be right , that don't mean its wrong,
just lay down your head , stay here in my bed
chorus
I dont want to be alone tonight
Need you by my side
Arms Around Me tight and
I don't wanna be alone tonight
Tell me your secrets,
Ill tell you mine,
Tell me the truth or a little white lie
Got nowhere to go, nothin to spend but time
I dont want to be alone tonight
Need you by my side
Arms Around Me tight and
I don't wanna be alone tonight
Bridge:
Its getting late, getting cold outside
we can stay right here til the sun shines
I dont want to be alone tonight
Need you by my side
Arms Around Me tight and
I don't wanna be alone tonight
You dont wanna be alone tonight
We dont have to be alone tonight
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Good guitar melody. Clear lyric, except the line,“Got nowhere to go, nothin to spend but time..” There, I’m not quite sure what you mean.
June 11, 2018
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Ditalian Cole
Good guitar melody. Clear lyric, except the line,“Got nowhere to go, nothin to spend but time..” There, I’m not quite sure what you mean.
June 11, 2018
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