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Alone Tonight

Emily Frances

June 01, 2018

Genre: Country

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Two people started dating and the girl was always ready to go home after the date, the man would ask her to stay every time, this song is from his point of view , told by her. Two people who want to be together but are afraid of becoming attached,

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Does it need more depth? Longer verses or a bigger chorus? Recomendations welcome!


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Ditalian Cole

Good guitar melody. Clear lyric, except the line,“Got nowhere to go, nothin to spend but time..” There, I’m not quite sure what you mean.

June 11, 2018

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Ditalian Cole

Good guitar melody. Clear lyric, except the line,“Got nowhere to go, nothin to spend but time..” There, I’m not quite sure what you mean.

June 11, 2018


Alone Tonight

Turn Off The Lights, keep the curtains drawn
Might not be right , that don't mean its wrong,
just lay down your head , stay here in my bed

chorus

I dont want to be alone tonight
Need you by my side
Arms Around Me tight and
I don't wanna be alone tonight

Tell me your secrets,
Ill tell you mine,
Tell me the truth or a little white lie
Got nowhere to go, nothin to spend but time

I dont want to be alone tonight
Need you by my side
Arms Around Me tight and
I don't wanna be alone tonight

Bridge:
Its getting late, getting cold outside
we can stay right here til the sun shines

I dont want to be alone tonight
Need you by my side
Arms Around Me tight and
I don't wanna be alone tonight

You dont wanna be alone tonight
We dont have to be alone tonight

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