When you are caught in the middle of Loving them and moving on.
Clear Message?
Would you change the structure at all?
Hi Evan,
I like the song I think people
can relate to this idea.
I do agree with Jack’s comment
about the cord progression.
you are on the right track.!!
Keep on writing !!
Earla DeCoursey
May 24, 2018
Hi Evan,
I like the song, especially the lyrics are very good, great hook. The melody is a little monotonous, but that doesn’t really bother me and I think that’s kind of your style. Good work - keep on!
June 01, 2018
Pretty nice work Evan, lyrics are great. Did you produce that? I just was thinking at the end of the third verse that sentence but you still feel like mine, what if you stepped it up an octave before you hit the chorus
July 21, 2018
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We had it made for a while
baby didn’t we
we had a love on fire
we gave it everything we had
girl honestly
we went the extra mile
Maybe I should have gotten rid
of all our photographs
cause they sure drive me insane
I don’t know where you got the will
to carve another path
when Im still feeling the pain
Chorus:
Maybe it’s just a little,
late for holding on
But i’m feeling caught in the middle
Of loving you and moving on
but you’re moving on
I’m caught in the middle
Please don’t tell me how you
found it easy leaving me
or where he takes you now
all I want is to be over you and underway
leaving us behind
but you still feel like mine
Chorus:
Maybe it’s just a little,
late for holding on
But i’m feeling caught in the middle
Of loving you and moving on
but you’re moving on
I’m caught in the middle
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Hi Evan,
I’ve certainly been “In the middle,” so I could identify with the song. It seems like your chord progression repeatee Am, G, F, throughout the song… I was hoping to hear something different at the chorus (possibly C, Dm, G). That’s just me, but again, I feel the sentiment of the song and I like it. Nice job!
May 24, 2018
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Hi Evan,
I like the song I think people
can relate to this idea.
I do agree with Jack’s comment
about the cord progression.
you are on the right track.!!
Keep on writing !!
Earla DeCoursey
May 24, 2018
1
Hi Evan,
I like the song, especially the lyrics are very good, great hook. The melody is a little monotonous, but that doesn’t really bother me and I think that’s kind of your style. Good work - keep on!
June 01, 2018
1
Pretty nice work Evan, lyrics are great. Did you produce that? I just was thinking at the end of the third verse that sentence but you still feel like mine, what if you stepped it up an octave before you hit the chorus
July 21, 2018
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Jack Speer
Hi Evan,
I’ve certainly been “In the middle,” so I could identify with the song. It seems like your chord progression repeatee Am, G, F, throughout the song… I was hoping to hear something different at the chorus (possibly C, Dm, G). That’s just me, but again, I feel the sentiment of the song and I like it. Nice job!
May 24, 2018