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Fall In Love Again

Steve Parry

April 14, 2018

Genre: Country

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written by Steve Parry & Karen Kiley


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Frank Renfordt

Hi Steve - I like this song, it has a nice feel and I can relate to the lyric. Consider to re-write the first verse with a similar phrasing and rhyme scheme as you used in the second verse. The second verse has a better flow than the first one. If you add the female voice only to the chorus it will have a better effect. Good Luck.

April 15, 2018

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Chad Sellers

Hey Steve, Great sound on this one. The voices of vocalists fit the song nicely. There was a line that didn’t rhyme in verse one that bothered me/seemed to knock the song off kilter for me. I think it was the last line that ended in “lost”.
I also didn’t care for the female and male vocal on verse 2. Might be interesting to hear just her sing verse 2. Or just the male.

Oh, I wrote this and then I read Frank’s message above before I posted. I guess we pretty much had the same thoughts! haha
Good work on this one.
Chad

April 18, 2018

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Frank Renfordt

Hi Steve - I like this song, it has a nice feel and I can relate to the lyric. Consider to re-write the first verse with a similar phrasing and rhyme scheme as you used in the second verse. The second verse has a better flow than the first one. If you add the female voice only to the chorus it will have a better effect. Good Luck.

April 15, 2018

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Chad Sellers

Hey Steve, Great sound on this one. The voices of vocalists fit the song nicely. There was a line that didn’t rhyme in verse one that bothered me/seemed to knock the song off kilter for me. I think it was the last line that ended in “lost”.
I also didn’t care for the female and male vocal on verse 2. Might be interesting to hear just her sing verse 2. Or just the male.

Oh, I wrote this and then I read Frank’s message above before I posted. I guess we pretty much had the same thoughts! haha
Good work on this one.
Chad

April 18, 2018


Fall In Love Again

Written by Steve Parry

Fall In Love Again ©2017 Steve Parry/Karen Kiley

I'm lying in the bed.
Inches away from you
But the way I feel
I may as well be on the moon
Is it another man
Or the one I've become
Girl Is there any chance
we can get back what we lost

I don't want to live this way
it’s tearing me up inside
Laying awake feeling alone
Night after empty night
why can’t I just reach out
So We can go back when
You loved me like you loved me
One more time
Cuz baby I know we can
fall in love again

how’d we get to this place
where I can’t Feel my heart
something’s gone cold
the fires gone out/we’ve grown apart
I know we’ve made mistakes/ you feel so far away
I want to make it right
just want to end this fight
Can’t take another day


Chorus x 2

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