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Thats Okay With Me

Evan Bingham

February 27, 2018

Genre: Country

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Gordon Donaldson

First off, the song sounds good, although the story is not fully there yet. The 1st verse is all over the place, and needs to be rewritten. It doesn’t set up the story well. Where he wants to take things fast, and she wants to take things slow. Could be ideal for a duet - with a nice contrast of personalities.

February 28, 2018


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Thats Okay With Me

Written by Evan Bingham

Verse:

Childish and nervous like I pulled up to your drive

and picked you up about 8:00

You’ve never looked so good

I’ve never felt this way

I’m only thinking one thing

Chorus:

I wanna run the town

you say lets slow down

time will only make things right

I see what we can be, and I think that maybe

we’re gonna share more than just this night

if thats okay?

Yeah, Baby thats okay with me

Verse:

I put the car in drive

zero to 65

eager to start our night

I don’t know whats moving faster

the car or my heart after

you looked and smiled my way

Chorus:

I wanna run the town

you say lets slow down

time will only make things right

I see what we can be, and I think that maybe

we’re gonna share more than just this night

if thats okay?

Yeah, Baby thats okay with me

Bridge:

I know I tend to rush into things

Thank God you have a patient heart

you have my word, I’ll try to take things slow

cause this is just the start

Chorus:

I wanna run the town

you say lets slow down

time will only make things right

I see what we can be, and I think that maybe

we’re gonna share more than just this night

if thats okay?

Yeah, Baby thats okay with me

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Gordon Donaldson

First off, the song sounds good, although the story is not fully there yet. The 1st verse is all over the place, and needs to be rewritten. It doesn’t set up the story well. Where he wants to take things fast, and she wants to take things slow. Could be ideal for a duet - with a nice contrast of personalities.

February 28, 2018


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