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Two More Waiter

Marvin Adcock

February 19, 2018

Genre: Country

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Even knowing it may not be a cuttable song in today's country market, sometimes you just have to scratch your honky tonk traditional country itch and write it anyway.


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Gordon Donaldson

This is a good demo. Well sung, and it is well written too.

February 21, 2018

Tommy Grimes III

I would say “keep on scratching” in that case, as it has had good results satisfying that honky tonk itch smile

February 23, 2018

Bobby Davis

Sure has that Jerry Jeff Walker feel. I like it.

February 28, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

Ya see There Marvin, there you go again writing good Country songs

May 01, 2018

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Marvin Adcock

Hey Joe….thanks again pal.

May 01, 2018

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Bob Abner

A slight bit of Merle Haggard flavor, imho

August 05, 2018

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Gordon Donaldson

This is a good demo. Well sung, and it is well written too.

February 21, 2018

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Tommy Grimes III

I would say “keep on scratching” in that case, as it has had good results satisfying that honky tonk itch smile

February 23, 2018

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Bobby Davis

Sure has that Jerry Jeff Walker feel. I like it.

February 28, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

Ya see There Marvin, there you go again writing good Country songs

May 01, 2018

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Marvin Adcock

Hey Joe….thanks again pal.

May 01, 2018

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Bob Abner

A slight bit of Merle Haggard flavor, imho

August 05, 2018


Two More Waiter

Written by Marvin Adcock

There's too much world to rearrange, and my best bet's to make it go away
Too many things I can't change and so little I can explain
I'm tryin' to disconnect my intellect, I need more whiskey instead of less
So give me two more waiter there's a lot more on my mind

Give me two more waiter
There's a lot more on my mind
Too much left to think about
It's only 'round twelve-fifty-nine
So set me up again my friend
Before it's closin' time
And give me two more waiter
There's a lot more on my mind

I guess I'm not as over her as I'd like to be
Can't quite lick it, or reach my limit, I'm an emotional casualty
Can't seem to loose these lovesick blues, so open up another bottle of truth
N' give me two more waiter there's a lot more on my mind

Give me two more waiter
There's a lot more on my mind
Too much left to think about
It's only 'round twelve-fifty-nine
So set me up again my friend
Before it's closin' time
And give me two more waiter
There's a lot more on my mind

Well it seems I gotta lotta thoughts left to be thunk
They keep runnin' through my head all at once
I'm a long way from feelin' I've had enough
So it's thumb down on life and bottoms up

So give me two more waiter
There's a lot more on my mind
Too much left to think about
It's only 'round twelve-fifty-nine
So set me up again my friend
Before it's closin' time
And give me two more waiter
There's a lot more on my mind

Yes there is - give me two more waiter
There's a lot more on my mind
Just give me two more waiter
There's a lot more on my mind

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