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You Still Make Me Broken

Noora Särkinen

February 06, 2018

Genre: Pop

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Something I've been writing a few months, now also trying the music production thing.

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Ani Bergman

I liked that it was unique.
I might put the chorus again after the bridge.

February 09, 2018

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Lisa Caterbone

I love the unique sound of your voice, but I feel the mic input is a bit too hot or loud. Turn the input down a little as there were sections where your voice felt like it was distorting. Also look into a reverb for your tracks. Not a lot, just a little to soften the edges of the sound. Warms it up a bit.

February 11, 2018

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Ani Bergman

I liked that it was unique.
I might put the chorus again after the bridge.

February 09, 2018

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Lisa Caterbone

I love the unique sound of your voice, but I feel the mic input is a bit too hot or loud. Turn the input down a little as there were sections where your voice felt like it was distorting. Also look into a reverb for your tracks. Not a lot, just a little to soften the edges of the sound. Warms it up a bit.

February 11, 2018


You Still Make Me Broken

Written by Noora Särkinen

VERSE 1
What would you do if you knew
How lost I was since you were gone
Those messy nights with booze and someone's touch
made it even harder
Where were you when I needed you the most?

CHORUS
Looking back I can't understand
why I spent so much time for trying to make you love me
It made me broken
You made me broken
You still make me broken

VERSE 2
When I will look at you
feeling nothing at all
Without bringing those tears to my eyes
When you will be just a memory I can wipe away?

BRIDGE
Right now I'm so done with loving you

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