Something I've been writing a few months, now also trying the music production thing.
Anything feedback appreciated!
I love the unique sound of your voice, but I feel the mic input is a bit too hot or loud. Turn the input down a little as there were sections where your voice felt like it was distorting. Also look into a reverb for your tracks. Not a lot, just a little to soften the edges of the sound. Warms it up a bit.
February 11, 2018
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VERSE 1
What would you do if you knew
How lost I was since you were gone
Those messy nights with booze and someone's touch
made it even harder
Where were you when I needed you the most?
CHORUS
Looking back I can't understand
why I spent so much time for trying to make you love me
It made me broken
You made me broken
You still make me broken
VERSE 2
When I will look at you
feeling nothing at all
Without bringing those tears to my eyes
When you will be just a memory I can wipe away?
BRIDGE
Right now I'm so done with loving you
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I liked that it was unique.
I might put the chorus again after the bridge.
February 09, 2018
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I love the unique sound of your voice, but I feel the mic input is a bit too hot or loud. Turn the input down a little as there were sections where your voice felt like it was distorting. Also look into a reverb for your tracks. Not a lot, just a little to soften the edges of the sound. Warms it up a bit.
February 11, 2018
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Ani Bergman
I liked that it was unique.
I might put the chorus again after the bridge.
February 09, 2018
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