Last winter I took my first trip to Nashville. I scheduled a co-write with Jimmy Borja and Roger Beckett. In a few short hours we came up with this diddy. I hope you like it.
Do you think it works as a pop track.
I like this track a lot! Nice pop jam and I love the hook. Nice job on the vocal. I wouldn’t change much. I think the bridge needs to be a little stronger/more unique though.
Might be a good tv or movie cut, I agree with Frank on that. Good work!
February 14, 2018
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Seven Billion
Mikalyn Hay, Jimmy Borja, Roger Beckett
Verse 1:
I want you to know
Oh
I dont want to keep riding solo,
put your hand in mine, we'll fly
just let go
You
caught me off guard
oh
You unlocked my heart without a question
had me from the very first impression
Pre Chorus:
Standing steady holding strong through all the ups and downs
I was fine but since you're mine it turned my world around
Chorus
Seven billion people here
but you're the one I want
In a world of doubles
You can be my other
Seven billion people here
but you're the one I want
everything you do and say
Makes a picture perfect day
I'll be here
Cause youre the one I want
Verse 2
Time
can only tell
where we're gonna go and what we'll do there
wherever this may go,
im in I dont care
They
Don't really know (oh)
In a crowded room it's you I see first
When I see your smile it lights up my world
Pre
Chorus
Bridge:
Tell me what I've done
to deserve your love
I don't want nobody else
Double Chorus
Seven billion people here and youre the one I want
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Hi Mikalyn, I like the song. May be it’s not a radio smash hit, but it’s really ear candy and it’s easy to relate to the song. The lyrics are a little bit cliche but that is not a big issue for a Pop song. Could be something for TV too.
Take care
Frank
February 05, 2018
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I like this track a lot! Nice pop jam and I love the hook. Nice job on the vocal. I wouldn’t change much. I think the bridge needs to be a little stronger/more unique though.
Might be a good tv or movie cut, I agree with Frank on that. Good work!
February 14, 2018
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Thanks Chad and Frank - always a thrill to get feedback. Appreciated 
February 15, 2018
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Frank Renfordt
Hi Mikalyn, I like the song. May be it’s not a radio smash hit, but it’s really ear candy and it’s easy to relate to the song. The lyrics are a little bit cliche but that is not a big issue for a Pop song. Could be something for TV too.
Take care
Frank
February 05, 2018
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