I get so busy I don't come listen and post enough on this wonderful forum...So, this morning I'm going to take in some of your songs and post a recent one as well. It's called "Lonely." My cowriter brought the idea of not wanting to admit it hurts.
Feedback welcome and appreciated 
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Lonely
Hunter Leath/Christian Taylor Music/BMI
Donna King/BMI
That mirror in the bedroom is used to lookin at you
Coffee in the kitchen, ready at 6am
That floor is waitin’ on your barefeet
Countin’ down the minutes ‘til you’re walkin in...
That sun tryin’ to make it’s way through the shades
And shine a little light in this place
CHORUS:
It ain’t my heart that’s breaking, it’s just the walls that are achin’
Front door’s unlocked and waitin’
For you to come home to me
I’m fine, Baby it’s the bed, it’s the bed that’s lonely
Saturday champagne wants to taste your lips
Record player spinning missin’ you dancin around
That flat screen that watched every move you made
Thinks it’s a little too quiet now
CHORUS REPEAT
It ain’t my heart that’s breaking, it’s just the walls that are achin’
Girl this whole house is praying
For you to come home to me
I’m fine, Baby it’s the bed, it’s the bed that’s lonely
(c) 2018 Donna King Music
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Absolutely beautiful imagery here! Lovely! I love “it’s the bed is lonely”
February 05, 2018
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Debbie Convoy
Absolutely beautiful imagery here! Lovely! I love “it’s the bed is lonely”
February 05, 2018