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On Earth In Us

James Kelso

February 03, 2018

Genre: Christian

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We can be Christ to this world if we let his kingdom come, on Earth in us, a supernatural life empowered to pull back from the precipice the weak and the powerless in the name of Jesus.

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6 Responses


Donna King

Jamie… This song truly moved me. I’m wondering if the title should be “The Name Of Jesus.” With worship… straightforward seems important… so the congregation sone’t have to think too much… But love this song… either way… beautiful job!

February 03, 2018

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James Kelso

Thank you Donna, I really appreciate the comments. I see what you mean with the title. The title I chose is more relevant to the song meaning I think, but that title is a bit more of the hook isn’t it?

February 03, 2018

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Ani Bergman

It is quite beautiful. It is a wonderful idea.  I know from experience that sometimes we want or try to let Jesus in and work through us, and sometimes he does, but he doesn’t all the time.  I love the song though.

February 05, 2018

James Kelso

Thank you Ani, I appreciate your listening!

February 05, 2018

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Bob Abner

I’m curious—how come you didn’t post lyrics for this song?

August 06, 2018

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Bob Abner

I like your voice—would have liked to follow along with the lyrics—I DO think there are some definite nice spots in this song.

August 06, 2018

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On Earth In Us

Written by James Kelso

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Donna King

Jamie… This song truly moved me. I’m wondering if the title should be “The Name Of Jesus.” With worship… straightforward seems important… so the congregation sone’t have to think too much… But love this song… either way… beautiful job!

February 03, 2018

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James Kelso

Thank you Donna, I really appreciate the comments. I see what you mean with the title. The title I chose is more relevant to the song meaning I think, but that title is a bit more of the hook isn’t it?

February 03, 2018

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Ani Bergman

It is quite beautiful. It is a wonderful idea.  I know from experience that sometimes we want or try to let Jesus in and work through us, and sometimes he does, but he doesn’t all the time.  I love the song though.

February 05, 2018

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James Kelso

Thank you Ani, I appreciate your listening!

February 05, 2018

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Bob Abner

I’m curious—how come you didn’t post lyrics for this song?

August 06, 2018

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Bob Abner

I like your voice—would have liked to follow along with the lyrics—I DO think there are some definite nice spots in this song.

August 06, 2018


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