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You’re My Weakness

Debbie Convoy

January 31, 2018

Genre: Country

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We hall have someone or something we just can't let go....


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Sandra Lyerly

Very pretty song! I dont have anything else to say but I really like the imagery. The song flows really well from idea to idea. Great job!

January 31, 2018

Debbie Convoy

Thank you so much Sandra! I appreciate you taking time to listen and your feedback!
~Debbie

January 31, 2018

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Rick McGee

This real good, Debbie.  One lyric comment:  1st verse, last line -  maybe change “Then” to “When” because the back to back “th” (Then that) is difficult to sing.  I enjoyed it!

February 01, 2018

Debbie Convoy

Thank for your thoughts and for taking the time to listen Rick! ~Debbie

February 02, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

Man how true this song is..Hits right at home..Love it Debbie..“Like that empty shotglass thrown against my door”  great line, I can see that

February 20, 2018

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Sandra Lyerly

Very pretty song! I dont have anything else to say but I really like the imagery. The song flows really well from idea to idea. Great job!

January 31, 2018

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Debbie Convoy

Thank you so much Sandra! I appreciate you taking time to listen and your feedback!
~Debbie

January 31, 2018

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Rick McGee

This real good, Debbie.  One lyric comment:  1st verse, last line -  maybe change “Then” to “When” because the back to back “th” (Then that) is difficult to sing.  I enjoyed it!

February 01, 2018

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Debbie Convoy

Thank for your thoughts and for taking the time to listen Rick! ~Debbie

February 02, 2018

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Joseph Guerra

Man how true this song is..Hits right at home..Love it Debbie..“Like that empty shotglass thrown against my door”  great line, I can see that

February 20, 2018


You’re My Weakness

Written by Debbie Convoy

You're My Weakness
By
Debbie Convoy (debsk8r@aol.com)
soundcloud.com/debbie-convoy

VS 1
Everybody's got something they won't admit,
A weakness that they can't resist.
A part of you wants to forget/ that sin you must confess
You try to drown the memories in your soul
But the Whiskey lets the truth unfold
Then that weakness appears/ and you lose all control..

CH 1
When you whisper close to me
I feel your breath upon my cheek
And my heart soars/ my knees go weak
It’s the scent of you on my sheets/
Oh it's your midnight knock on my front door/ I can fight it no more
Baby it's You! It's always been you,
You're my weakness…

VS 2
When you left my heart shattered on the floor
like that empty shot glass, thrown against my door
Prayed the whiskey and the rain/ would wash away the pain
This is all wrong….This can't be right
Why can't I turn….. and walk away from you tonight?

CH 2
When you whisper close to me
I feel your breath upon my cheek
And my heart soars/ my knees go weak
It’s the scent of you on my sheets/
Oh it's your midnight knock on my front door/ I can fight it no more
Baby it's You! It's always been you,
You're my weakness…

Bridge
You're the sin I must confess
You're the one I can't ignore
I can't fight it anymore
Baby it's you… It's always been you…
You're my weakness….

CH 3
When you whisper close to me
I feel your breath upon my cheek
And my heart soars/ my knees go weak
It’s the scent of you on my sheets/
Oh it's your midnight knock on my front door/ I can fight it no more
Baby it's You! It's always been you,
You're my weakness… You're my Weakness… You're my weakness...

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