Love comes in many forms. This is but one Love story. Don't judge.
Say what you will. I can take it.
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Dennis, Clean track which is nice. Title alone draws a listen. Lyrics? Well….to each his own!
October 16, 2013
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Ha! What a fun song. One small criticism. In the chorus, sing the words, “niche” and “fetish” more naturally, letting the accents fall where they normally do. It sounds a bit forced the way you sing those words, no doubt in an effort to emphasise ryhme. IMHO, natural sounding phrasing trumps rhyme, but that’s just me. This is an original idea, as far as I know, and clever, fun to listen to. Kudos for being original. Originality is so rare in music and songwriting these days.
August 07, 2014
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Freddie’s Foot Fetish
Freddie sells shoes at the Newport Beach mall
He loves the feel of a woman’s heel in his palm
Touching her toes, even through hose
His fingers tingle - it really turns him on
(chorus)
He’s got a foot fetish
In love with heels, arches, and toes
When he meets a girl
Down is where his gaze always goes
He’s found his own romantic niche
Freddie’s foot fetish
Freddie loves to walk along the seashore
Wonderful sights, naked delights galore
Sunglasses on, he stares south of the thong
His eyeballs ache, all those piggies to explore
Repeat Chorus
(bridge)
When he gets his hand below the ankle bone
He loves to fondle and kiss, tickle, caress
‘Til the lady moans oooooo
Repeat Chorus
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Dick,
You are right love does come in many forms. Haha. To be honest, I really like the way it flows and the way it sounds. This song fits nicely with the story line. It is always fun to see songwriters push the boundaries of topics. Thanks for sharing.
August 05, 2013
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Dennis, Clean track which is nice. Title alone draws a listen. Lyrics? Well….to each his own!
October 16, 2013
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Ha! What a fun song. One small criticism. In the chorus, sing the words, “niche” and “fetish” more naturally, letting the accents fall where they normally do. It sounds a bit forced the way you sing those words, no doubt in an effort to emphasise ryhme. IMHO, natural sounding phrasing trumps rhyme, but that’s just me. This is an original idea, as far as I know, and clever, fun to listen to. Kudos for being original. Originality is so rare in music and songwriting these days.
August 07, 2014
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Dick,
You are right love does come in many forms. Haha. To be honest, I really like the way it flows and the way it sounds. This song fits nicely with the story line. It is always fun to see songwriters push the boundaries of topics. Thanks for sharing.
August 05, 2013
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